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Aww, just aww. Smex next? XD Or will Tifa be there to cock block? Hrmmmm, you need to write smores.

I'll say this : illiteracy is terrifying to me. It's obvious we all here love to read and get off on words. Maybe that sort of gets projected onto the characters until they're downright fucking scholarly, which in most cases, isn't very likely. i.e. Sephiroth is beautiful and smart and owns a library AND manages to fuck like a porn star. The Cloud you're writing may be illiterate, but he is NOT stupid, but rather street smart and talented in more physical arenas. That strikes me as very realistic and balanced. I just wanted to throw up my gang sign at you, because its totally pimp that you're going outside of some norms.

Oh yeah, almost forgot : LOVES IT! WAAAAAH WRITE MOOOOOOORE!!!!! XD XD XD XD XD <3 <3 <3 <3

Oh no! Poor Cloud! Poor Sephiroth! Umm...who was seducing who again? I thought that it was Cloud trying to seduce Sephiroth, but it looked like Sephiroth was also trying to seduce Cloud...Oh, well. Anyway it was fine. I wish that they hadn't been interupted though. I bet that they wish that, too. I really love this story so far. It's so funny!

MOTHER FUCK.

MOOOOOORE PLZZ.

I'm really enjoying this story. You've written it very well, not wordy but covering everything and building up the characters nicely.

I look forward to more.

Oh goodness...lemme guess...Tifa? Dammit, why does she hafta ruin the pretty moment

Heh, you're just taking all the glamour out of being a professional dancer: work, pain, poverty, more work (lots of pain). Doesn't sound like much fun. At least Sephiroth makes a decent Prince Charming. So it's a good story and, better yet, it's well written. Keep it up. =)

I am really enjoying your story so far, can't wait for more!

I alway thought FF7 would make a great Broadway musical with dance, with multy-media stage. With a mixture Metal,Rock, and classic music. Sword and popular and modern Dance work, sort of jive.

And I can picture a line of dark suited Turks, doing tap/ shuffling dance, to something like "Dirty Deeds done dirt Cheap"! LOL Ballet is cool too, and I can picture all those nasty monsters in "tutus and ruffles", but certainly not Sephiroth or Cloud! Hurry write more I love it, G

WAAA so tragic! Poor Cloud.. We need some tender lovin to heal the past up in this biotch.

"Remember to look at her eyes, man. Her *eyes*." Yeah, definately helps *not* to look at her breasts when you want to impress a girl =p

This was another good chapter. You've transposed the characters into your AU very well. I can tell your having fun with Genesis =)