rate_review Reviews

First off, I'm really loving this so far! I'm looking forward to future chapters. Seifer is a pain in the ass in VIII, but I've always thought that his issues stemmed from general cluelessness and an inferiority complex rather than any fundamental character defect. It'll be nice to see your idea of what he's like after Squall finally beat some sense into him.

There were a few minor grammar issues, and your writing as a whole is slightly stiff, but it's very easily understandable so I don't mind. If you want a proofreader, hit me up. :)