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for Rising In The Ranks

by Lynsey

schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This fic is priceless and hilarious!
I was laughing throught the entire fic, from the beginning to the ending (the only exeption being Cloud's and Zack's break-up).
I seriously had to stop between sentences just to get my giggling under control so that I could continue reading xD
I just love this fic to death ^-^

I loved how the beginning was so simple as a blow-job for a graveyard shift, and like a snowball rolling down a hill, it finally reached the general.
I also loved that Cloud didn't acchieve everything simply because he slept around, but because he used it as a tool; getting private lessons and security codes in order to becaome a better fighter. That the sleeping around just gave him an edge.
And the ending. The open ending is PERFECT.
I love this fic to pieces ^-^
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DELISH! DEEEELISH!

This is the ficlet I've been waiting for all my life XD

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