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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oaaaww... After chapter one I want to hold them in my arms and cuddle the tight. The poor things are hurting...!
The cute fluffy ones are hurting...!
MAKE IT BETTER!!!
(One a side note, they are really cute ^-^ And there is absolutely nothing wrong with your writing. See, you even made me feel their pain!)
The cute fluffy ones are hurting...!
MAKE IT BETTER!!!
(One a side note, they are really cute ^-^ And there is absolutely nothing wrong with your writing. See, you even made me feel their pain!)
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you made it all better in chapter two!!! :D :D
I love this one to pieces ^-^
The way Zack makes the think of themselves differently and how the pack is starting to form.
...I love your flow ^-^
I love this one to pieces ^-^
The way Zack makes the think of themselves differently and how the pack is starting to form.
...I love your flow ^-^
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... They are so wolfish, it's... I don't have the right adjective for it.
Scary, endearing, funny, cute, pet-able...
I wuw them ^-^
Scary, endearing, funny, cute, pet-able...
I wuw them ^-^
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...Raw meat makes me quizy, but since they are pretty much wolves in human skin, it's only natural that they eat their meat raw.
Angeal's insistence at cooking his meat seems like a feeble effort of trying to keep the last parts of his humanity intact.
Poor Angeal...
He'll get used to it, his pack will take care of him ^-^
...Have I already mentioned how much I love this series?
Angeal's insistence at cooking his meat seems like a feeble effort of trying to keep the last parts of his humanity intact.
Poor Angeal...
He'll get used to it, his pack will take care of him ^-^
...Have I already mentioned how much I love this series?
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You just proved it. Hojo is insane. (As if that fact needed any more proof *rolls eyes*)
Even if they are part wolves, does he still need to treat them like animals? They have wolf-instincts and human mind, you don't need to treat them like dogs!
On another note, you're creating an awsome 'verse! I love how you give us all the angles - their eating habits, the breeding, their own thoughts on the matter...
This 'verse = LOVE!!! <3
Even if they are part wolves, does he still need to treat them like animals? They have wolf-instincts and human mind, you don't need to treat them like dogs!
On another note, you're creating an awsome 'verse! I love how you give us all the angles - their eating habits, the breeding, their own thoughts on the matter...
This 'verse = LOVE!!! <3
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cloud is just so...HUGGABLE!!!
I love that Genesis took the mother-role of the pack, and that he snarled at the males ^-^ GO GENESIS!!
I love, love, LOVE your creation ^-^ I want to take it to bed with me and cuddle it at night. I'm sure it would give me good dreams ;)
I love that Genesis took the mother-role of the pack, and that he snarled at the males ^-^ GO GENESIS!!
I love, love, LOVE your creation ^-^ I want to take it to bed with me and cuddle it at night. I'm sure it would give me good dreams ;)
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my my... Chapter seven was so full of hurt...that it hurt me!
Thank god Zack wasn't there and came after and cleaned everything up. And the pack sticks together ^-^
But poor Seph. Now he's the freakest one of them all... :l
It's amazing how you can write the way you do. To let us in on the wolves minds (the way they speak and think of things) and in their hearts; make us readers cry for them and want to hug them and kidnap them from Hojo's mad hands...
...I want a blushie of them ^-^
Thank god Zack wasn't there and came after and cleaned everything up. And the pack sticks together ^-^
But poor Seph. Now he's the freakest one of them all... :l
It's amazing how you can write the way you do. To let us in on the wolves minds (the way they speak and think of things) and in their hearts; make us readers cry for them and want to hug them and kidnap them from Hojo's mad hands...
...I want a blushie of them ^-^
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December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snicerfit* Nice with the yelling. Can we castrate Hojo with a rusty spork yet though? And where was Cloud? now you've got me worried you're going to torment him next!
This was a great surprise to find on my birthday. Fav fic updates always make the day better. ^^
This was a great surprise to find on my birthday. Fav fic updates always make the day better. ^^
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December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely Love this story and plan to tell Anorexic Whale about it and be sure that he/she will probably be blown away.
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So cute. I can't wait for more!