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I'm in love with your story! I think this pairing is interesting, and not written nearly enough, and that Vincent's classic stoic and often times melancholy behavior is wonderfully complimented with Yazoo's crassness and innocence. I also love the time-setting. I'm a sucker for medieval settings, and you kept well to it. Also, your religious nut Cloud, I laughed hard! And you write Aeris so good. Er, I guess, let's just say I love all your characters haha. Keep up the wonderful work.

Interested? I'm disappointed there isn't more! ;~; Please update more soon? I'm so hooked on this story. xD ♥

Interested, of course I'm interested. I've been a bad bad fyre for not reviewing this one, but I;ve been so distracted lately. More please. I love your stories, you know that!

I'm luvin' this. keep goin. yay yazoo/vincent!

HOLY SHIT!! I love it!! Vincent need's to accept that he wants Yazoo quickly, for my sanity's sake! I LOVE this! Too beautiful boys together. It's a wonderful thing! Looking forward to the next one!!

The anticipation... it's going to kill me... T_______T
Oh god I can't wait to see where this will lead next.

Wicked chapter! Yazoo is definitely getting into his own character here, showing that mix of detached boredom and sudden snapping violence. Loved Yazoo's protectiveness as he fiercely springs to Vincent's defence, even though, as Vincent said, he does not need to do that. Very strong reaction from the vampire too. He's a little rough with Yazoo here but it's understandable as he in his own way is trying to protect the boy himself and would be devastated if anything happened to Yaz and he wasn't there to stop it. Great finish with Vincent battling his own dark desires against young Yazoo's ever-so-tempting allure. He's gonna find that harder and harder to resist as Yazoo gets older and I'm so looking forward to reading about that! Tormented vampires...mmm... ;)

This fic has oodles of tension and excitement that makes us readers keen to find out what adventure Yazzie gets himself into next! He seems to find trouble everywhere he goes...or maybe it's trouble that finds him. Or maybe it's Aeris. If she'd stop meddling in his affairs perhaps he wouldn't have all these nailbiting dramas to contend with. Either way, this kid is going to have one crazy, exhilarating life and I'm glad I'll get to read about it!

BTW, thank you for the long chapter. I like lengthy chapters. Makes the yummy Yazoo goodness last longer. ^__^

Ohh. This is really good.
I'm definately looking forward to more. T_T

Heh, it was amusing imagining (slightly burnt) cookie crumbs falling into Vincent's collar and making his neck all itchy. The things he does for that boy. It's cute how Yazoo is trying to befriend him and it's also cute how Vincent is doing the same. ^__^

Learning to read! And speaking proper English. Go Yaz! I always knew he was a smart one despite his rather uncouth manner of speaking. It's great to see him growing and bettering himself. You'll make a man out of him yet!

I'd probably be shocked myself if I walked into Yazoo's room and found him dressed like that. Wow. Pretty...but wow. It's interesting how casual Yazoo is about it too. I thought maybe he wouldn't want to dress that way again since it was what he used to do on the streets to survive. Too many bad memories and such. I mean, the last time he wore clothing like that it wasn't exactly a pleasant day for him. But perhaps he is moving on already. Which is great.

And just what is wicked Areis planning, hmm? That saucy wench. Vincent better keep an eye on her for she is surely up to no good...

love love love! great chapter! at the end i thought vincent was gonna feed off Yazoo, but.....that would be bad if Aerith saw the bite.......
look forward to more!