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That was very good! I loooove Yazu and Vincent! My two faves! Write more please and i promise i will read and review xxxxxxxxxxxx

Two chapters for me to catch up on! You've been busy. :) The first one was oh so painful with poor Yazoo's injuries. For some reason the most beautiful ones always seem to suffer the most and you did a great job of portraying the pain he was feeling. Ouch. *winces*

The latest one was developed nicely and I'm glad to see that despite everything Yazoo is still being the fiery, fiesty little street urchin that he is, bad language and all lol It's a real delight to see him act this way instead of the calm, cool, refined character he's usually written as. I assume that given enough time he will eventually end up like that but for now I really enjoy his spunky personality and can't wait to see how the story continues. I feel bad though, that Vincent will lie to him about his brothers being dead. Boy, is Yaz gonna be pissed when he finds out the truth! I look forward to the next part.

(And I appreciate the thanks regarding my review. I've given loads of comments and I always thank people for reviewing my fic but I do believe you're the first person who's returned the favour and thanked me back!)

Hehe...ooh Vincy you shouldn't lie like that. I may well have to make him pay for that in my own fic.

Poor Yazoo to be told his brothers are dead. And yes, his language is abysmal. Perhaps Vincent has some elocution lessons in mind?

Looking forward to the next chapter immensely,

Kerianya XxX

Oooh an update, how lovely! ;D Hope to read more soon as I would love to see how this story develops. ♥

I'm glad Yazoo is getting help.
Good job so far and hope you can update again soon.
:)

Awww...I always liked Aerith. If ever I feature her in my fics she's always in a favourable light. CloudxAerith is the only het pairing I like from that game.

Another excellent read, by the way. I don't think that Yazoo could aske to be in a better person's care.

Kerianya XxX

WONDERFUL!!! XD I can't wait for next chapter!! Hehe, finally Vincent got his hands on Yazoo! XD Please write more soon! ^.^

poor Yazoo ;-;

Hope you update soon.

Oh, this is something really novel and unique! Love the world you've put the boys into, ugly though it is, with all the language and sensory descriptions of the disgusting surrounds. Also love how you've shown their bond and the way they care about each other so much, even if they are not keen on showing it all the time, like boys from any era.

Gods, that last chapter tore out my heart completely. You do good pain, let me tell ya! Amazing job. I'll definitely be reading this fascinatingly unusual series. :)

Oh my god! Poor Yazoo...my Yazoo. I was actually crying at the end of this chapter. Vincent's ultimatum was so tragic and cruel. I beg of you, let Yazoo be reunited with his brothers. I don't think Loz and Kadaj would survive without him.

Kerianya XxX