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Wow. Now I'm the one speechless. Really didn't expect that! I didn't think it would happen so fast and in such a tragic way. I don't know whether to be happy or sad or shocked... All three I think! You always do things I don't expect which makes this story so exciting to follow. I enjoyed how you made the whole process an act of violence instead of a romantic one. It's a timely reminder of why Vincent didn't want to do this in the first place. Vampires are killers. They are cold. They have to be due to their very nature and what they have to do to survive. Somehow, I think Yazoo will cope with it much better than Vincent thinks...

Amazing update! One of the best ever! I'm in awe of you, girl.

(You're welcome for the last review. lol. Glad you liked! Sorry I spelled your name wrong, though. Oops!)

Wow... Now seriously. I am NOT in any way an easily touched person (bless my sadistic soul), but this chapter made my chest tighten in the most unusual way... I think you are the first one to write a fanfiction where I almost felt like crying.. Yazoo killing Aeris was just so..I'm speechless. And I love how you describe them as vampires, as you said vampires are killers, they are predators and humans are their prey.
And I absolutely LOVE it. Neh, now the only thing I want to know is how vampires mate with each other. ^.^ Teach me? (my perverted nature makes me bounce back fast after almost letting my emotions take over the better part of me! Long live yaoi! *cackle*^)

Well. I guess my last review was a bit ironic, after all then. Lol.
You've just made me the happiest person alive... I started this chapter thinking "God this would be PERFECT if when Vincent arrived back at the house Yazoo were bleeding to death in his bed." Lol.
I'm so happy Vincent gave in and did it rather than lose Yazoo!!
For a moment I was thinking how gloriously tragic it would have been for you to have just killed him. That said... I'm glad you didn't. XDD
As always... looking forward to the next chapter.

I love how you present vampires. You're completely right about them. By the way, I'm still want Vincent and Yazoo to have makeup sex!

Ah! Na dann kann ich ja das Review auf Deutsch schreiben und mir nicht einen mit dem Englisch abbrechen. Was mich auch schon dazu bringt: Ich finde, du hast ein wahnsinnig gutes Englisch. Ich traue mich ja selbst nicht, Geschichten auf Englisch hochzuladen, und das trotz eines Anglistikstudiums- Schande über mich. Deswegen von mir an dich: Allerhöchsten Respekt! Die 'typisch deutschen Fehler' - das ist gar nicht so viel und auch eher so Sachen, bei denen ich mir denke 'Huch, wörtliche Übersetzung. Wo es mir zum Beispiel wirklich deutlich aufgefallen ist, war bei einer Stelle im vorletzten Kapitel glaube ich: 'Hm', made Yazoo' - das fand ich sehr lustig -ansonsten gibt es aber überhaupt nichts aszusetzen ^^ Und hey, ich sehe es ja ein dass du mir den Sandort von seinem Sarg nicht verraten konntest XD ich weiß ja wie das ist mit dem Drama und der Angst die man in Geschichten einbaut- dasmacht ja beim Schreiben besonders großen Spaß lol.
Auch jetzt wieder ein sehr gutes Kapitel - vor allem die Ironie der Situation gefällt mir SEHR ^^ - und hay, es macht mir nicht so viel aus, dass Aeris tot ist. Ich muss zu meiner Schande gestehen, dass ich sie in den Spielen ohnehin nicht wirklich leiden konnte - die Geschichte hier hat das zwar irgendwie ziemlich abgemildert, aber doch nicht so sehr, dass ich sonderlich traurig über ihren Verlust wäre X'D Ich merke grade wieder, dass mir etwas düstere und un-nettere Charas mehr liegen als solche rückhaltlos Grundgütigen ^^''

Freue mich schon auf das nächste Kapitel!

Dearest beautiful Yazoo,

I have been made aware of your impending wedding and I wish to send my very deepest sympathies. Such tragic news, my boy. Though I'm sure Tifa is a lovely lady and your master means well by aquiring her hand in marriage for you, we all know HE's the one you should be marrying. He's an idiot. Hopefully one day he will realise this. Until then, feel free to make him as jealous as you possibly can so that he remembers what a fabulously delicious catch you are and how stupid he was to let you go. But please, be so kind as to take him back if he begs you. Which, eventually, he will. One day. I wish you all the luck in the world because you deserve to be happy and I know you can only be with Master Vincent. Even though he's a complete and utter bastard at times...

Oh, please also pass along my congratulations to Aeris. At least she has been matched with a more suitable spouse than you have been. I'm sure that boy will treat her right. Try not to hate him too much, won't you?

See you at the wedding. I will be the one wiping away a tear with my lace handkerchief.

Yours sincerely and sadly,
Rina

PS. Schwarze, great update! :) This story never fails to entertain and frustrate at the same time! And yes, in that pic Tifa does look a lot like him. Spooky.

8D More please? xD ♥

Yes interesting...And it was Dave who is gorgeous. Unfortunately I may not be updating for a week or more. I live in Victoria, Australia and am grieving along with the people of my state over the fire deaths, and the fact they are still burning and my mother lives not too far from one of the areas still burning.I will get back to it, but at the moment I just can't.

Ohh, Yazoo is a crafty, cunning little beast, isn't he? Trying to get vamp-ified by luring Vincent with his blood. When he wants something, he'll try anything to get it. That's why he's so fun to read about! Vincent is being very noble though, but one day he'll have to realise that it's the only way he and Yaz can be together forever.

Oh no, please don't marry Yazoo off to a woman! (again!) That would be...terrible!I get what Vincent is trying to do but Yazoo will never go for it.

I like Yazoo with a ponytail. *sigh*

Hmm, I never thought that Tifa looked like Yazoo. I'll have to check the movie again and compare. But then again, a LOT of the characters look very similar, with very fine and feminine features, even the guys. It's like they used the same face model. Reno, for example. He's almost as pretty as Yazoo. That's why I love this movie - all the gorgeous boys!

I'll have to listen to Vincent's Japanese voice...didn't get that far! In the English version Reno says, "Man," once or twice but there's no real replacement for "Yo." And yeah, there's always something that gets lost in translation or screwed up completely. When you watch the English subtitles with the Japanese audio, the words on the bottom of the screen are totally different than what they say in the English version. It doesn't match at all. The bit where Kadaj calls Cloud a black sheep translates to "traitor". Who DOES the dubbing? Seriously. I could do a way better job and I don't even speak Japanese!

Poor Yazoo!
That's so horrible!
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Stuck with Tifa, of all people. I'd just kill myself.
I'm dying. DYING. to see how this turns out.