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I think I've reviewed this chapter...unsure! Anyway I love the introduction of Squall's last bf or sex buddy. Love the act of dominence from Squall at the end. But how will farm boy Seifer react to it? Also is Griever going to be angry with Seifer? An animal needs to eat. Love Seifer so much in this story? He's so innocent!

Wow... this is .... exactly the type of story I've always wanted to read T___T Thank you~! *more tears of joy*

There is only 1 word that i can use to describe this
SUPERB!!!
it had me hooked up from the first chapther >,<
the story had a refreshing feel to it that makes it very much different from other Seifer/Squall fics out there.

A naive Seifer is soooo cute!!! though that role is usually hold by Squall, but reading what you have done here it's really really cute!
Naive, Calm and Collected at the same time? Man, only you can pull this off >.< i'm really looking forward to future chapters.
U made me love a Naive Seifer as much as the Bastard Seifer that u portayed in your other fics XD

SQUALL IS HOT!!! hehe.....
A persistant and horny Squall Vs Naive little country boy Seifer~~
Who will win?
Go ahead and reveal that answer to us in your own sweet time and style =)
i'll always be one of your eager fans
All the best!
Ganbatte Kudasai~

I can't wait to see how Seifer is going to react to this once he gets time for it to all settle in his head! How will it effect work? Will Kohoshi continue to try and get in the way!?
My mind is racing with dozens of questions. I'm so excited!
I never expected Squall to be so implusive and just throw himself at Seifer that way!

I love this story. I'm just dying for the next chapter. I want to know Seifer's reaction to Squall's kiss. I love how you've made Seifer such a complex character, he's smart and naive...its so adorable. I wonder how Griever is going to react to Seifer not feeding him on time. Thought it was so funny how Seifer didn't know what a menege a trois is! Are you going to introduce Irvine and Zell? Maybe, Rinoa, Selphie and Quistis? I can imagine one of them as Seifer's past girlfriend?

Continue on with the great work,

Vinny

EEeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I loved the kiss at the end. <3<3<3

I like this AU! It's interesting to see these two in these types of roles, looking forward to you writing more!

Wow I think this is a great start for a new story. Squall seems a tad out of character, too cunning and flirty I think. Maybe ease up on that a little bit, but it's your story and I will read it either way, so you do what you think fits the story best!!

Seifer is sooo cute in this so far though. I hope you update soon!!

I love the idea of this story. Making Seifer the naive one is such a good idea. I wonder how Squall is going to seduce the farm boy.
I love the use of Greiver the cat. So cute. I can't wait for an update.

I am intrigued ;0; there's not much stories where squall wants seifer, and I like it xD

please continue soon!