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for Combat Training for the Stubborn

by SapphireEyes

person BlackLynxWriter
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I don't think i have ever laughed so much in my life at a fic! this is soo funny and yet I go aww!!! at times too i love it and really badley want more!!! its really awesome!!!5 STARS!!!!!!!
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. Drunk!Zack...singing 'I Kissed a Girl' and rubbin' up on every stoic/surly hot guy in sight...It's so cracked out it's HILARIOUS!! I just can't get the image of Seph batting at Zack to get away with a total "DO NOT WANT" look on his face, while the drunken fool is teasing him like a $20 whore!! XD He would be the genki, wouldn't he? And everyone's reaction to Seph gettin' bonked in the head with the staff was priceless!! XD Oh...I have to say I love how you've written these characters, and I have to say I am quite fond of Captain Skylark (the gentlemanly superior he is...)! Wonderful banter, and wonderful awkwardness between them all! This is so damn funny! XD And thank you for making this dolphin safe! LOL!!
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant chapter :) I think I love Genesis and Angeal *even* more now, which is quite an achievement I can tell you! Great action this time as well, and Cid & Seph are as brilliantly drawn as ever. I look forwards to reading more, thanks!
person Komikitty
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD poor Cid. Sanders and Ericson need the shit beat out of them, badly. I vote They attack Cid, and he beats them up, but they cheat and take him down and while they try to take advantage Seph and his sidekick Zack save the day! And I need to stop watching old cartoons...
person NeonOranges
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so freaking much! I'd never even heard of Seph/Cid before, but now I can't get the pairing out of my head. I love how true to character everyone seems, mostly Cid though. He's so gruff and grumpy and cute! Free hugs for Cid!

Right, so I'll just sit here and re-read the story so far another three times before waiting for another update.

(I'm on your storeez, stalkin' yer characters)
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*breathes* Okie. I live! Stay where you are Sapphy!! *looks around her room and checks under her bed* If you don't I'll go zombie on you!! O-O

Awww poor Cid. If I were him I would've totally beaten them to a pulp too! Too bad Seph got in the way. :/ He's no fun. lol *shakes head* One of these days that mouth of his is going to get himself into soooo much trouble! Pleasurable trouble with the general of course! ^-^
person Ranna
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're stories are so lovely. I'm addicted. I also like your Valenwind. And the sexual innuendos! Ah, you strike to the heart!
person nekoluver666
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I c-c-can't BREATHE!!!!!!!! *struggles for air while laughing her ass off at Zack*
person Elenna
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like much. new pairing, but not unwelcome. i LOL'ed alot. I love that puppy.
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! This was a great chapter, so funny, and yet I can imagine it all happening hehe! I think you've captured them all down to a 't' and I really, really love the pairing! Can't wait to read more :)

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