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for What Lies Within

by WolfessSanu

person Powder
schedule May 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Please write more soon.
person Jasmine
schedule July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update this story! It is so addicting and well written and I love it - I know it's been 3 years since the last update, but please please update! Please!!!!!
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this story! It was very well written, and I loved the interactions between the characters, especially Reno and Rude! Zack and Angeal go so well together, too. <3 Thanks again!
person cloudyseph
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow....you've got me completely hooked! This is a great story, from an interesting POV. It is great! You've kept all of the characters pretty well in character, and even when they aren't you've made it believable. Great Job! You're gonna kill me until you update next! *grins* Can't wait!
person cloudyseph
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! that was so good...You've done a great job making the situation believable......Angeal/Zack is a cute pairing but not a very popular one that I've seen so far. Great Job!
person secretwishes527
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow!
i liked the fight scene, when Angeal told Zack to sit, and Zack immediately obeyed and that ended up saving him. I also like the way how Zack is so dependent on Angeal and totally trusts him, and the apologizing when he really didn't do anything wrong was so endearing! i'm going to miss Zack calling Angeal 'Master' but he did earn Angeal's name, huh? another thing i like in this world of yours is how many people are into BDSM and Zack isn't considered 'weird' just because he lives a certain way. awesome, and eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
person secretwishes527
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh! i like it! it's very...normal. it's not overdramatized, or too sappy. it seems realistic, well realistic in a fictional world ;) good job, and keep it up!!!
person Jirian
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good this is starting to get interesting i cant wait for the next chapter ^^!!! please update soon!
person Jirian
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o.o ohhh earring lol very nice touch XD reno was funny i like that please update soon ^^
person Elenna
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg l love it! poor Zack though. look forward to more!

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