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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was just incredibly hot, and so in-character! <3!!
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my my my... I'm not sure I'm coherent enough to review but I'll try ;)
The sex was... certainly creative. It was also hot and brain-melting, not to mention realistic.
Now, putting the obvous aside...
The characters weren't exactly IC on my opinion. You portrayed your outlook on them and the great part is that you succeeded in it. They were real and believable.
I liked that you had reasons and consequences; a clear start, midpoint and an ending. I especially liked that you had a real ending. Usually most of the authors just write the beginning and just end the fic when the smut stops. So points to you ;D
And your flow, the way you wrote, was beautiful :)
I think your experience shows through and I hope you won't be stopping writing anytime soon ^-^
The sex was... certainly creative. It was also hot and brain-melting, not to mention realistic.
Now, putting the obvous aside...
The characters weren't exactly IC on my opinion. You portrayed your outlook on them and the great part is that you succeeded in it. They were real and believable.
I liked that you had reasons and consequences; a clear start, midpoint and an ending. I especially liked that you had a real ending. Usually most of the authors just write the beginning and just end the fic when the smut stops. So points to you ;D
And your flow, the way you wrote, was beautiful :)
I think your experience shows through and I hope you won't be stopping writing anytime soon ^-^