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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's amazing what you have created. There aren't words enough to describe it.
The flow is flawless. Reno's narratives break the chapters nicely and give more insight to things than the text otherwise would. It was a stroke of genious to write those in ;)
The way you tell the story and plot of the game and movie flavored with smut is spiced just right and it captures the readers attention. You make it so natural that it doesn't look like you have a ready script you're following.
I love the characterization you did. The way Rufus and Tseng are themselves and still human, how Rude is such a teddy bear and Reno is so laid-back and energetic.
You got it down to a T.
And then there is the brain-blowing smut. Hmm... *forgets herself in dreamland*
The flow is flawless. Reno's narratives break the chapters nicely and give more insight to things than the text otherwise would. It was a stroke of genious to write those in ;)
The way you tell the story and plot of the game and movie flavored with smut is spiced just right and it captures the readers attention. You make it so natural that it doesn't look like you have a ready script you're following.
I love the characterization you did. The way Rufus and Tseng are themselves and still human, how Rude is such a teddy bear and Reno is so laid-back and energetic.
You got it down to a T.
And then there is the brain-blowing smut. Hmm... *forgets herself in dreamland*
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great job! i love this story!!
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ASOTA
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad the president's dead. i'm sad reno had to blow up his sector. i'm mad hojo hasn't been killed yet.
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i hope that you will update soon. this is getting very interesting. if there is any way, i would love to be notified when you update. if not, i'll just keep checking. stay safe.;)
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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please continue this soon! i can't wait to read more!
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