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Hey, still love the fic! You've kept it almost exactly as the game with few exceptions (Zack being alive and Corneo's mansion incident), but that's why I like it. Especially the Zack/Cloud parts! Looking forward to reading more!


p.s. Have you ever thought of posting at fanfictioin.net? You can alert everyone when you have a new chapter posted (I have no idea how to do it here). I'd love to be alerted when you put up new chapters.

Mediaminer and fanfiction are the two biggest sites, and the ones that allow alerts. Plus, the site's are just generally better. I really don't like adultfanfiction, but I also don't want to miss out on good stories because the site sucks.

And yay for Cloud/Reno interaction. They're my favorite post-game couple :-p

THANK YOU for not doing yuffietine - I really don't understand where people pick up that pairing from. Besides the fact that her bouncy-ness would probably drive him insane in about 5 minutes (well, moreso ;)) she's 16 at the start of the game and he's 60! Even ignoring the 30 years sleep, he's 30, nearly double her age. Sorry, squick! Uh yea, rant done, review time :) I'm enjoying this story, but the last few chapters have pretty much just been the game, dialogue taken directly from it and all. What would be helpful to make this more "your" story is your take on how Zack being there would change things. Keep in mind, Cloud knows he's not an ex-soldier as he doesn't have Zack's memories, and Shinra is probably still after them since Zack wasn't killed on the cliff. I am enjoying it, just wanted to add a few suggestions :) Oh, and do you post this elsewhere? AFF sucks in the fact that you can't do alerts to find out when somethings updated!

I love this fic and can't wait to see what happens so update asap please!!!!

I love this story, I always look for any new chapters posted. And I love how you kept the scenes in order with the game. Awesome story!

I T-T too. Many times I played CC - but the cruelty of the ending... And I can assure you, it's really hard to change me into the hose.

Me again. To be honest, I don't usually post comments... But you are so nice. Zack&Sephiroth is one of my fav couple. I'm waiting for the next chapters.

Okay, it's well written, but Sephiroth and Zack as a couple? *LOL* That silver hair bastard just wiped out a whole town and killed a bunch of Zack and Cloud's loved ones. Realistically speaking, would you want to fall in love with someone who just killed all your family and friends, not to mention betraying you at the same time? I know I wouldn't.

I thought you would need to know that I'm reading your fic. And I really like it (great pairings) so please continue! ^_____^