rate_review Reviews

I liked the way you portrayed the characters. Reno and Cloud both have their own issues and problems and you kept that part of their personalities tightly incontact, not forgetting it for a moment. That's a very huge plus in my books ;)

You played the situations well, too :)

And the talk about Reno being a fox and Cloud being a wold and Reno wanting to give one a good pat was amusing ans appropriate. Very clever.

Then there was the actual sex. Which was (for the lack of a better term supplied by my poor puddled brain) HOT. Right now there isn't anything better I could possibly say ;D

Oh I really liked this, it was hot. You should continue it or make a second part. I know it was a one shot, but do another. You did an awesome job with the pairing, and, and wow, sex on the bike, that was unbelievably hot!
-Lys

i want more more more!!!
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