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Oh my God!!!! I've read this story like a million times, printed it out, even shared it with a friend, and I just realized I've never reviewed it:( Shame on me. No really, I'm ashamed. I've enjoyed this story too many times and far too much to not have at least told you as much. I'm sorry it's so late in coming, but in my defense I thought I already had.

Cloud is such a lovable dumb blonde in this, but he's still the hero he became through his struggle. I hate it when people basically make him a damsel in distress. Yes he’s the uke, but dammit he’s still a very capable, mako enhanced warrior and he deserves to be treated as such. What happened in Midgar with the collapsing building could have just as easily happened to Sephiroth as Cloud. You also did a nice job on his personality. I don't like overly broody Cloud, he's boring and a little ridiculous. At the same time ridiculously happy Cloud is.... well.... ridiculous. You’ve managed a happy medium here and it really works. Same with Sephiroth. I would have been disappointed if he’d immediately trusted Cloud and started falling for him without doubt and reservations. The way he handled the whole thing was very natural.

I was thoroughly pleased and impressed with how you handled the medical aspects of this story. The way Sephiroth went through withdrawal was a unique idea. I don’t think I've ever seen a story where he had to suffer anything other than emotional upheaval from Hojo’s experimentation. It makes sense that he’d have some kind of complications from all that shit in his system. Plus the whole impotency thing was both frustrating and hysterical.

I really enjoyed this story and I still do. Thank you for sharing it with us.

LOVED this story!!!

LOL. I re-read the story. I beg to differ on the coffee in chapter 6. Caffein is actually not bad. There has been extensive research performed on it and they have not found any adverse effects apart that it actually speed up metabolism (which is why doctors recommend heavy people to start off the day by one back cup a day along with a walk and breakfast about 30-60 mins later) and to some extent it may have protective effects against colon cancer, which is one of the major cancer forms in society today. Hehehhe.. Just had to add that. And Sephiroth is right to drink it black at it excerts its best effects then. :) Hotdogs though... LOL

I think this is one of the best stories I've read. I absolutely loved it. You have done an amazing job. Thank you very very much for this tantalizing, sexy, dreamingly sensual and tasty story. Much appreciated.

Thank you very much

Hakucho

That story was super awesome~! ♥ Now to recover from losing sleep over reading it through xD You have a fantastic writing style, hope to read some future fics from you. ^,^

THIS IS RIDONKULOUS.

Bitch, I've been up reading this story for like 7 hours. I was about to go to bed nice and early, and decided, 'Oh, what the hell. Let's check AFF.'

MISTAKE!

This story was so cute, and so fucking good. Seph and Cloud were amazing. Tifa was awesome and Avalanche were all cool as fuck.

And of course I had to keep reading for when Seph could finally get it up. And then I had to keep reading for when he'd finally fuck Cloud. And then I had to keep reading for the ending.

WTF! It's 6:30 in the morning!

But this story had me smiling the entire way through. I laughed a lot too, when Cloud and Tifa were talking about Cloud's love for Seph (Can we change the subject? Hell yeah!), and at all the little embarassing things Cloud did, and the cut off shorts with Seph slapping himself across the face, haha!

It was amazing! And totally worth staying up late to finish it. I was even a victim of the 4am downtime. I could have jumped ship and went to bed. But no, I actually sat here and played the stupid space ship game just so I could read more, haha!

Excellente! But then again, you've got your finger on something magical, because you're uploading lots of amazing stories lately. Love this, love you, love love love! <3

WOW. I *adore* this fic! I was immediately taken in by the plot, and i'm soooooo glad that you posted all of the chapters at once, I would have been very impatient otherwise haha :P Your characterisation is spot-on, and I loved the UST you built up in the first few chapters. You portrayed their relationship convincingly and emotively, and I loved every second of reading it. Thanks for sharing this great story!