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more chapters please!!! it's getting good!

Who boy...It's been a long time since I have reviewed something of yours there dear sex kitten<3
Still love this, it's wonderful. You really should continue on this wonderful fic, quite intriguing there love.
Anyways, good workings.

hey! a jealous sephiroth fic! I love it. I enjoyed the smutty zxc scene to! Cant wait for more.

That was an awesome second chapter to a point. I mean I loved Sephiroth and his creepy obsession with Cloud and using Zakk to get a taste that was hilariously sexy if not mildly sadistic creepy as hell turn on. <3
But I am highly disappointed because you don't have anymore to go on after Cloud sees Zakk in the hall. I mean what the heck? Highly disappointed because I wanted more *sobs*
I mean what about Sephiroth going after Cloud. Or what happens when Cloud finds out what Sephiroth did to Zack?
SO many unanswered questions. >.<

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I don't know what to write....
But...
The first chapter I must admit blew my mind. It was sticky, and sweaty and steamy, and you could just feel the passion resonating from it the moment the first word was read. Every word fell into place perfectly like a sonata...
Yea I totally don't know where I am going with this..
But anyways, awesome fanfic thus far and I will be sure to read and review a lot more...
my dear dear sex kitten...
I never realized what a horny pervert you are...
I have never giggled so much in my life so kudos to you!
riiiiight...
ummm....
ok then...
I don't know why I am still dragging this on..
Awesome Fanfic once more!

Beautiful start! The story's awesome. Keep up the good work!