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As if I couldn't get the song out of my head already! xD lol I love this fic, I can feel raw emotion from Genesis and can almost sympathize with him. I'll be anxiously awaiting your next installments. ♥

Oooh interesting ;D ♥ Can't wait for more. :3

I really do like Genesis. He's such a contradiction, so arrogant and confident, and vulnerable and insecure. Story looks like a real stinker. I hope he will make Genesis happy, since Sephiroth is too busy being himself. (I love both of those broken boys. They definitely fall under the 'Life Isn't Fair' category.)

I'm interested to see where you go with this. ^__^

I really liked it, but at first I didn't quite get when Story was singing, perhaps you should try something like //This// or something similar to make it easier for your readers to pick up on that? Just a thought.