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October 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow i loved this story!!! Ther was not not 1 aspect of the plot i would change(my only complaint is a typo or 2). I am a lil dissapointed that ther wer no steamy scenes, but im not really all that botherd by it. Hope i can read mor AWSUM stories like this soon!!!
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Rukia
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was rivited to my seat I so wanted more its sad that it ended when it did ^^ i love the story
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You could have a really good story here but I wouldn't know because of everything in parenthesis. I just couldn't get past the first couple of paragraphs and I would really like to read the rest of the story. You have a great concept, but your side notes are really deterring from the story. I apologize if I seem rude as it wasn't my intention.