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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous start to the story. Can't wait for the 4th Chapter :)
Pooky xxx
Pooky xxx
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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is really, really good, i don't care if its a bit ooc, its still touching, can't wait for the next chapter
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Once again, another brilliant chapter.
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
absolutely beautiful, love tifa's character and cloud's also, you've done a great job so far, i can't wait to read more
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is off to to a great start! It's very refreshing to see a well written Cloud/Tifa fic especially a somewhat romantic one since most fanfictions of this pairing are nauseating and generally suck. I like the pairing myself (one of the only conventional pairings I actually like) but it's too bad that most of the fanfictions written about it are god-awful. I'll be looking forward to more chapters in this story!
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh stop. I didn't need to be thanked. You've made me blush.
Anyway, I still really enjoy this story. I enjoy reading the quotes at the beginning of the story, as well as how you so smoothly change from Tifa's POV to Cloud's POV. It's so easy to read that I just love it.
Anyway, I still really enjoy this story. I enjoy reading the quotes at the beginning of the story, as well as how you so smoothly change from Tifa's POV to Cloud's POV. It's so easy to read that I just love it.
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's about time I throw my hat into the ring as well, DAMN!!!! Out of the blue, a thoughtful Cloud/Tifa piece, and the second chapter had probably one of the hottest breast/ass stimulated orgasm scenes that I've had the fortune of reading. Not much needs to be said, but I can't wait for more!
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Tifa and Cloud ! ^^ they are my favorite male/female couple besides Seph/Aeris.
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May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I actually really like this. Despite the fact that it is short, I really and truly like it. I cannot wait for more from you.