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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, really amazing! I love the plot and dialogue and everything.
Speaking of dialogue, just one quick little thing I wanted to point out if and when you decide to edit this later- could you separate the parts where each character is speaking with quotation marks? That would help a lot. Besides that, I love this story, great job, keep up the good work.
Speaking of dialogue, just one quick little thing I wanted to point out if and when you decide to edit this later- could you separate the parts where each character is speaking with quotation marks? That would help a lot. Besides that, I love this story, great job, keep up the good work.