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July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love both versions!
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July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another superb chapter, Streti. Your writing just gets better and better.
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very hot stuff. Rosa's not the only one who hopes to see Rydia soon ;)
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Streti, you're a hero for doing a fic with this couple. Cecil and Rosa are by far my favorite Final Fantasy pairing! And as usual, your writing is spectacular.
As far as a suggestion, I think you'd do well to expand on the thoughts and feelings of the people involved. You're very skilled at that, and it definitely adds to the sensuality of the story. I particularly liked Mary's thoughts as she asked Cecil if he'd like her undressed.
As far as a suggestion, I think you'd do well to expand on the thoughts and feelings of the people involved. You're very skilled at that, and it definitely adds to the sensuality of the story. I particularly liked Mary's thoughts as she asked Cecil if he'd like her undressed.