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January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chap. Don't be so self-critical.
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon! I love this story and I'm dying to read more of it!
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update this soon! I love this story and I'm dying to read more of it!
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Little adventurous Cloud... and sex in the gym. That was hot.And sweet.
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was very hot, and sweet with how doting Sephiroth was being.
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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Cloudie is sick. Suck him back to health, Seph!
Love it as usual.
Love it as usual.
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Cloud. The little guy didn't even have a chance! Please update again soon!
Hugs & Kisses
Katonie
Hugs & Kisses
Katonie
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
uh-oh... sicky cloud... uncool... but it's sweet for the most part.
unfortunatly you made one grammar mistake at the end... "hiw own sleep stilled h is hand." should have been "his own sleep stilled his hand."
must have been an involuntary typo.
other than that, great chapter.
4 out of 5.
unfortunatly you made one grammar mistake at the end... "hiw own sleep stilled h is hand." should have been "his own sleep stilled his hand."
must have been an involuntary typo.
other than that, great chapter.
4 out of 5.
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your shinranians remind me of the Psychlos from Battlefield Earth, but less foul tempered.
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
god, this is so good!!! do you have any idea of how difficult it is to find a decent fiction on the internet? i mean, i like all the ooey gooey stuff, but almost NOONE writes out the hot spicy stuff...like, am i a perv, or is everybody else deprived of good imagination???
BTW, can i have sephiroth as MY, slave??? pleeeease??? my b-day's coming up on the 19 of august.....pretty pleeeease????
thanks again for the wonderful story so far, can't wait to read the rest^^
Miau.
BTW, can i have sephiroth as MY, slave??? pleeeease??? my b-day's coming up on the 19 of august.....pretty pleeeease????
thanks again for the wonderful story so far, can't wait to read the rest^^
Miau.