rate_review Reviews

Fantastic chapter! I loved the complete submission by Squall near the beginning. And he's lying to Quisty too.

I think he's getting in over his head and he'll realise he wants more of what Seifer can give him, the ability to completely lose control.

Seifer's got a nasty temper sometimes, and I like how Squall is setting him off, more of that might just end up with another romp in the sack! We can hope!

Anyways, please keep going, I thoroughly enjoyed it :)

Ooh, this is really hot, please keep going!!

Oooff! As much as this was a humiliation for Squall, I think you conveted it really well.

I like how Seifer appears to be straight and is now getting hot for Leonhart.

Great chapter, can't wait to see where you take this now. Definitely looking forward to it! :)

Jeez Chem, you're a little twisted. /Wonderful/ writing! You paint both men's myriads of emotions so beautifully; I can practically see and feel their frustrations, angers, and desperation. I really love that your story starts out so dark. As much as I enjoy some of the stories that begin with the two gunbladists falling lovey-dovey into each other, it's refreshing to see something that breaks away from the fanfic norm. I impatiently await your next post. Thank you for your words!

My apologies for the double post, but I had to thank you with a heavy *bow* for reviving my love of Sukunami (I read your profile here on aff). I have read /so/ many of Suk's stories and loved them all, but it was a couple of years ago and while still endlessly fond in my heart, my memories had begun to fade on them.

So thank you again, for giving me the push to seek Suk's webpage, and for writing what looks to be a great story.

Good start to the story, I'm glad there's still some hostility (is that even a word?) between them, and that neither of them will back down so easily.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Your writing is beautiful! Please continue with this story. Thank you so much for your words.