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i love your stories and im so glad you reposted them i was so upset when i couldnt fnd them on fanfiction.net i cried my poor cat thought i was crazy i actually started with the mighty have fallen but ive read almost all your stories and i love them all i hope you write more

Oh wow, I love this and how you write Zack. He is such a vastly different and extremely lovable SOLDIER boy! This was wonderful, thanks!
-Lys :D

Mmm, chapter 5 was utterly delicious. I've been waiting for the continuation of this story, and you certainly delivered! Love it, keep up the amazing work. :D

Wow, you are simply amazing....I have enjoyed and really, really, really, loved each story I have read from you. Your whole Alliance Series had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Now this, well I am absolutely fascinated by the fact that you are using the opening and ideas from Crisis Core and making them into your own story line. The way you write Zack is jaw dropping. I really don't know how to praise your story to even come close for how good it is. I am eagerly looking forward to see the next part of this. The little addy of Reno and Rude---PRICELESS!
Regardless, I am really hoping that with the way this story is going (how similarly it's following CC) if you are going to end it on a sad note...I sure hope you don't, but that won't stop me from staying along for the write and reading it.
Thanks!
-Lys :D

Fantastic story! When Zac chucked the dildo through the window in suprise and it landed at Reno and Rudes feet, I laughed so hard I cried. The scenes with Lazard are extremely hot and I'm loving the mind fuck that Lazard is giving Zac. Can't wait for more. Thanks for writing.

OMG....I love your story so far hope to read more soon. It's been really interesting and well written.

Oh, fuck, yeah! This is so damn hot! And we allknow Lazard and his pin-stripe suit is the pimp of Soldier *grin* Is there more to come, plz?

This is rediculously hot is all I can say XD. Please continue this soon!

:P I saw you don't have any reviews, so I figured you need to know about your AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!! XD Love the dynamics you got going, and I love your portrayal of Zack. Can't wait to see how the Director goes about getting into his bed!! LOL

Mirage

PS - if you don't mind, I'd like to know when you update. toki.mirage at gmail dot com. Thanks!