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for Mirror, Mirror

by RikuRocks

person Koku
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that you are a very wonderful writer! I haven't read something this good in a while; well done!

Having not played the games and having only my friends rather Pulp Fiction-like descriptions of what goes on in FF7, I can't give you any kind of critique on the level of in-characterness, but I feel like you've done a very good job getting into Rude's head. And staying there; I tend to bounce all over character's heads when I write, so this story just feels SO professional to me. I always love finding stories that touch on my favored pairing's relationships with each other rather then all the sex, and you have done a marvalous job weaving together this look into Reno and Rude's relationship with each other. Even just mentioning small details that might've been taken for granted or over looked, when they pressed their backs together for example and Rude was reading Reno thought that touch alone, it really strenghtens the feeling of this story.

Please, please never lower your standards! Fanfiction writers like you are such gems. I really enjoyed finding a treasure.
person Autumn Michaelis
schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I thought for a minute they had slipped into silent hill! Great fic!

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