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October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!! please continue this story it is amazing so far :)
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March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is an increasingly amazing story, I must say.
I truly hope you continue with this, as I'll be waiting for an update.
I truly hope you continue with this, as I'll be waiting for an update.
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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story. Sucha different plot and its amazing how you took and wrote the characters in your own way. Can't wait to see more,lookign forward to Sephiroth's next move!
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, is it really Cloud's father or was it Seph? Totally seems like it would be more Seph. But his father would be a neat plot twist...can't wait for the next chapter!
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOH! This is getting SO good! I can't wait to read more.
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's okay with the time skips sometimes it's vital to the story to use them. Don't doubt yourself so much. I write randomly as well. The story is flowing so beautifully. I hope you update soon. Until next time.
Dove
Dove
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah wow, read all of this and i'm completely hooked!
Poor Seifer, even though he was a potential rapist, I still love him! D:
I wonder what happened? Suicide maybe? Cause I know Zack isn't a murderer.
And what about Sephiroth? owo;;;
Poor Cloud, everyone is after his ass.
Anyway!
Please Make more! x]
Poor Seifer, even though he was a potential rapist, I still love him! D:
I wonder what happened? Suicide maybe? Cause I know Zack isn't a murderer.
And what about Sephiroth? owo;;;
Poor Cloud, everyone is after his ass.
Anyway!
Please Make more! x]
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome so far, I really like your story :D
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg please please please don't let Seifer be dead, please let it be yuffie over dramatising it.
love the stalker Sephiroth idea
poor Cloud... his sick ma and being the hottest peice of virgin ass in town
love the stalker Sephiroth idea
poor Cloud... his sick ma and being the hottest peice of virgin ass in town
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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think it had too much dialogue. It's the right about for what you're doing with the chapter. Great chapter great story. I loved Zack and how you have them friends but it's obvious that they both want to be more. Great job with that.