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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I found this most amusing. The ideas of Paine admonishing Rikku about spending too much time masturbating and of Wakka giving Tidus tips on pleasuring Yuna were very funny.
I also loved the way you portrayed Yuna's innocence. From the words you chose for her to describe the process of the act to the reaction she had to finding that her fluids has seeped through her shorts, it was very comical!
Introducing the relationship between Rikku and Paine to Yuna in such a way was well-played.
(Couple of technical things:
default gunner outfit - in-game reference; Perhaps instead of "default", habitual?
oh-so0-gently - typo)
Thank you for sharing! I enjoyed this.