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April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. It's a good expression of awkward, impulsive, first-time sex that I couldn't write. Yuna and Rikku didn't really know what they were doing, so they more or less moved until something worked. Nice details such as their teeth colliding during a kiss (ouch!) reinforces that theme.
I especially liked how the final line matched the title.
I especially liked how the final line matched the title.
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February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A CHALLENGER APPEARS
Er, I mean, where have you been, oh writer of plausible yuri fic, in this wasteland of boys getting themselves off on their bizarre ideas about lesbians?!
This was adorable yet hot. Oh to be a teen and able to get off with the ol' grind and bump!
Er, I mean, where have you been, oh writer of plausible yuri fic, in this wasteland of boys getting themselves off on their bizarre ideas about lesbians?!
This was adorable yet hot. Oh to be a teen and able to get off with the ol' grind and bump!