rate_review Reviews

Not bad. Personally, I think maybe add some more detail, and having the sex scene after will kind of cushion the blow of the violence--not that I dislike what you have. Far from it. But there are some who might, and none of us on this site object to a nice bout of...would it be classified as make-up sex, since there was just violence, or is it another first-time-romp? I don't know....
I do like it, though. An excellent plot idea, well spun out.