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January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME Hope/Vanille story!
Well done!
Well done!
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December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Once more, coulda been done better. First off, the sex talk scene doesn't really seem like one for that large a group to have.
Perhaps you should've split that up into a few minor conversations. It could've been loads of fun.
Sorry I can't give you more constructive criticism.
Perhaps you should've split that up into a few minor conversations. It could've been loads of fun.
Sorry I can't give you more constructive criticism.
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July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well done. I was hoping to see this story when I came into this corner of AFF and I was not at all disappointed. I think it would do wonders to continue this story-line. I await your work eagerly.