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for To Breed an Army

by Vidori

schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More of everything. I enjoy this very much :)
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*gapes* Not update? *runs off to wail* And by the way, I made started a depressing sequel. *more wails* I really hope you update though. (I've been checking everytime my net connection is good since it boots me off in the middle of everything =)
schedule January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*eyes wide* All have to say is that I found the strange addition of 'sir' during the sex scene and the bossyness to be sexy, though I am worried for the 'experiment's' impending rape. I wonder how that's going to work out... (though I'm sadistic enough to read through rape scenes) It's not that I condone it, but when it comes to fiction it's more passable (though a lot of people will probably wish to have my head in a platter for saying that since I DO add non-consensual sex in fics for added kinkiness and drama. *winces*)
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is the first time I read FF Yaoi (I'm usually more of a het girl) but the way you wrote the third chapter so descriptively made me enjoy it (because I'm kinky like that.) Your writing style is poetic and makes me feel like I'm pratically there experiencing things and its very rare for writers to pull that off. Also the bits of humor cracked me up (I won't say what I found funny in here, since I don't like spoiling). Hope to read more soon!
person Sesshie_Lady
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
how WOULD Seph react around her??

are you gonna do a Rufus/Tseng scene? id totally love it!!

person Squall-sama
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Review.
person Squall-sama
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*snickers*

Well you told me to leave a review..... I couldn't help myself.

I knew it was Sephi-chan and Zack. Hur, I have to admit I was surprised about the "Turk" being Rude though. You and your weird attraction to men... -_- lol

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