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Ahhhhhhhhhh so cute, and I really like LagunaxSquall and IrvinexSquall and there isn't many with those pairings so this is a real treat. :)

Just got through reading all the chapters. I enjoyed this^^ Fluff isn't normally my thing, but I made an exception because of the Laguna/Squall pairing. It's a pairing I've always wanted to write, but Laguna is just a bit too happy for my writing style. lol I wouldn't want to bring him down to my level. :P You do a wonderful job with it though! And the sex scenes are lovely. *^^* I like the other pairings as well, even the hints of yuri^^ Sometimes it is a bit difficult to follow, but I know you have so much conversation in this and it probably seems annoying writing all the: he said and then he said, etc. I just have to read carefully sometimes. But you seem to have a great deal of fun writing this and I thoroughly enjoy reading it! I look forward to the continuation so I can find out who Squall chooses^^

I'm still enjoying it! I guess I just have to look forward to seeing who Squall chooses. And ooooh it's getting mysterious! :-D

Very hot I can't help loving the Laguna/Squall pairing even if it's wrong (maybe because it's wrong!) Squall/Irvine is hot too (and Seifer/Zell, can't forget them). Ooh evil cliffhanger! Of course where I'd love them to end up involves the number 3 and the word some . . . Heheheh. Am looking forward to seeing where this is going and you are doing well with the writing even though English isn't your first language. I hope you can find a beta reader soon. Do you have a Livejournal account? I'm sure there's people on there you could ask, there are lots of different communities for Final Fantasy and yaoi fiction. I would offer but I'm afraid I just don't have time at the minute! Good luck!

The story is very nice i would really like to see if squall makes up with laguna somewhat though i have to say you had me laughing very hard during the Quis&selph gush on the fanfics but i have to say job well done i look forward to the next chapter