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for Don't Say the Word: Forbidden Evil

by XuniGeishaX

person Kira
schedule July 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excuse me, but who is Renata and why should we, readers, care for her? She's simply out of place.
person KiraxItachi
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good and thanks for the advice;) Keep working at yours and I'll keep working on mine.
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