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January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! I loved the plot and how you described what happened in Seifer's mind. It made me feel sad, and... as contraditory as it may seem, I'm happy to feel sad because of a good story. I loved the, how can I say it, the subconscious feeling of the writing. I also liked the description of Squall being tortured, it's so nice when he suffers... The ending was very sad and very good. Nice job!