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November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
DAMN that's hot. Only critique I got really is that you could have done more paragraph breaks, especially during the sex part. They're a bit too large for my liking but overall? THIS IS AWESOME. As for suggestions...
If you don't have a problem with bestiality and it's a serious kink of mine (along with Size and cum inflation but w/e), then why not go all out with a Behemoth King? Or any of the Behemoths (Proto, Humbaba, etc)? Really, you got Lightning captured by PSICOM so any monster in their arsenal throughout the game is probably wide-open if you want to continue that route.
There's also the good ole gangbang rape scenario OR better yet if you're feeling adventurous maybe you could do something with a fucking machine? Like some sort of machine that has a dildo piston, or two. ;)
...There's also the good stand-by of tentacles. I mean, Lightning and everyone else got their brands in the beginning from Anima using "appendages" (really, it's tentacles) to place it on them.
If you don't have a problem with bestiality and it's a serious kink of mine (along with Size and cum inflation but w/e), then why not go all out with a Behemoth King? Or any of the Behemoths (Proto, Humbaba, etc)? Really, you got Lightning captured by PSICOM so any monster in their arsenal throughout the game is probably wide-open if you want to continue that route.
There's also the good ole gangbang rape scenario OR better yet if you're feeling adventurous maybe you could do something with a fucking machine? Like some sort of machine that has a dildo piston, or two. ;)
...There's also the good stand-by of tentacles. I mean, Lightning and everyone else got their brands in the beginning from Anima using "appendages" (really, it's tentacles) to place it on them.