rate_review Reviews

Pretty good. I suggest doing one of Chocolina and Lightning.

Or perhaps have Jihl take control of Vanille

This is a great story, i hope you do more lesbian centric fics.

pretty good, speaking of ash here are two pics

http://www.hypnochan.org/hyp/src/12945364135.png

http://www.hypnochan.org/hyp/src/129453644682.png

Not gonna lie, continuing to love it. I was really waiting to see how the adoption would work, and I'm intrigued to see a bit more of how Seymour treats her daughter. I like that twisted love she shows her just to spite Lulu. I'll be interested to see to see what happens with Rikku as well, possibly some mindbreak going on. Dehumanization is always fun.

(That said, that farplane manipulation does give delicious terrible ideas for yet more genderbending. Lulu forced to deal with a ghost girl Chappu, perhaps?)

Definitely looking forward to seeing where this is going. It may be somewhere truly debauched, but there are ideas here that will almost certainly be delicious.

Interesting start. Though I would really prefer futa-Seymour to knock Lulu up...
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