Can we love

Hey this is my first fic so I dunno what you'll think, review pleeze!!! Constructive criticism appreciated!
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Cloud stepped into the lifestream. It was over. He could move on from his pain and his Geostigma was to be cured. He smiled at his friends, glad that he could have a chance to get to know them again.
Vincent sighed inwardly. He had fantasised about this so many times, but in those imaginings he and Cloud were alone, he could do as he pleased. He could touch Cloud’s soft skin, take off that sexy leather shirt....
He shook his head. This had to stop. A bead of sweat trickled down his face. He glanced over at Tifa, who was looking at him. She winked. Winked? How could she know? He had never confided the shadows of his soul to her, or to anyone for that matter. She gave him a knowing smile.
Cloud stepped out of the water and walked towards Vincent.
“I’m free” he smiled, “I am no longer burdened by my troubles. I not only don’t need to be alone, I don’t want to be alone. Vincent, what say I crash at yours tonight?”
Vincent panicked. How could he stand a night with Cloud sleeping near him? How could he restrain from letting all those feelings out? Feelings that surely would not be reciprocated?
“What’s wrong?” Cloud quizzed, “You look like you’re scared. You don’t...Oh my god you do!”
Uh-oh. This was it. It was out now!
“You have a secret girl don’t you? And you don’t want me to find her! And here I was gunna suggest we have a guys night out at the bar!”
“No. No girl...sure it sounds great,” Vincent knew it was a bad idea, but he couldn’t help himself. He had to spend every moment possible with Cloud

*****

Cloud shuddered. He shouldn’t have done that. He knew it was wrong, but he couldn’t help it. After all, Aeries had helped him to see clearly. The reason he had been struggling was because he felt guilty. Guilty for falling in love with another after she died. She had helped him to see that it was alright to move on. But was it alright to love Vincent? Could anything ever come of it? He couldn’t help it though. He had to spend every moment possible with Vincent. He looked at Yuffie who giggled.
“Can I watch?” she begged
“What?”
“I see the way you’re looking at Vincent! Can I watch?” she giggled
“Shut up,” grumbled Cloud, “And not a word”

*****


Vincent pretended to be drinking, turning to place the glasses on the empty table behind when Cloud wasn’t looking. He was so lost in his own mist of nerves that he didn’t even notice Cloud doing the same thing.
“This blows,” said Cloud, “Plus...I’m kinda tired...wanna just go back to yours?”
Vincent hesitated. If only he had known that he had no need to worry, that Cloud was feeling the torture just as much as he was, but Cloud had to express it. As they mounted Cloud’s motorbike, Vincent hoped that Cloud wouldn’t notice that he was starting to get hard. He just couldn’t get those bad thoughts out of his head.

They drew up to Vincent’s and slowed. Both took a deep breath, though the other didn’t see. It was now or never. They both conveniently “forgot” to turn on the light. Vincent closed the door and took another deep breath. He took a step towards Cloud, he could just make out his figure in the darkness. He couldn’t hold back any more. He grabbed Cloud and gently pressed his lips on Cloud’s. Before he could stop himself his tongue was searching Cloud’s whole mouth.
“Wait!” said Cloud, pushing Vincent away.
“I...I’m sorry...I shouldn’t have –“
“No, it’s not that, it’s just, I want to be able to see you” said Cloud.
Vincent turned to but one of the dim lamps on. As he turned back around, Cloud pushed him against the wall, kissing violently. His hands began to wander downwards and he felt Vincent throbbing. Vincent’s hand wandered too. He gasped. He had never imagined how big it would feel.
Cloud began to slowly undress Vincent, being sure to take his time, knowing how much it would frustrate and arouse Vincent. When Vincent’s chest was bare Cloud paid special attention to his pectorals. Vincent gasped
“Stop...don’t...can’t take it...”
“Alright I’ll just leave then,” Cloud grinned cheekily.
“No, no, no, I’m sorry! Don’t!” Vincent cried
Cloud continued the teasing, making sure everything came off as slowly as possible. When Vincent was naked Cloud began to toy with his balls, then he knelt down and began to lick. Vincent thought he was going to pass out from the pleasure. He had never guessed that it would be as good as this. No idea that Cloud’s tongue would know exactly how to lick his groin and his balls in a way that no one ever had before.
Cloud stopped and came back up to kiss Vincent again. Vincent couldn’t take it any more. Cloud may have had the patience to do everything slowly but Vincent just couldn’t. He ripped Cloud’s clothes off as fast as he could. He gasped again when he saw Cloud’s member. He couldn’t even begin to envision how that would feel inside him. As if he could read Vincent’s thoughts, Cloud pushed Vincent to the floor and entered him.

“Oh! Oh! Oh!” Vincent moaned. He was holding on as long as he could. Cloud moaned as well, making Vincent get closer and closer. The feeling of Cloud moving inside of him was indescribable, unbearable. Surely Vincent would burst with pleasure any moment.
Cloud thrust inside Vincent, at first he tried to go slow, but he couldn’t take it either, he began to push harder. How was it possible for anything to feel this good?

“Play with yourself!” Cloud commanded, his voice now raspy. Vincent obeyed without question. If he didn’t Cloud might stop again, and all he knew right now was he didn’t want this to ever stop.

“Oooooooohhhhh” Vincent climaxed, Cloud too, both calling out each other’s names.

Both lay flat on the floor, trying to regain their energy.
“I love you Cloud,” Vincent whispered, “I...I always imagined us together but I never thought it would really happen and I never guessed it could be that good.
“I love you too Vincent,” Cloud replied, “It’s been torturing me for so long.”
“What?” Vincent sat up, “I went through all that internal torment, and you tell me it was unneeded because you felt it too? Punishment time!”

He began to kiss Cloud’s neck, then move slowly down his body, paying close attention to his right pectoral, circling it very slowly with his tongue before moving slowly further down. As he became intimate with Cloud’s arousement, Cloud grabbed Vincent’s hair, not forcing, but as a sign not to stop. Much to Cloud’s disappointment however he did stop. Before Cloud could utter a word, Vincent had entered him...