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Reviews for Master of Slaves

By : arsenicstings
  • From AnimeAngelSisters on January 18, 2010
    Oh gods that was SUCH an intense chapter! I LOVED IT! I can't wait for more!
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  • From DekorxAo on January 01, 2010
    gah I love this story! Squall is so darn stubborn but I love that! I'm still trying to figure out how you'll ever get him to like Seifer! Lol Please keep up the great work, and update soon.. :P
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  • From ANON - EternalChaos on December 31, 2009
    I wish I knew where you were going with this story. It's well-written, but I can't help being worried. So many stories for this series are just...Is this just going to be another story where Squall submits to a life of servitude and humilation, treated as a slut and a possession-as someone less than human. I know you don't want to spoil it, but please don't let your fic become like that. I keep hoping Seifer will realize the truth-he's no different from the others slave owners, no matter how he treats his slaves. He's just taking away the future and humanity of innocent kids.
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  • From SprocketCamelot on December 30, 2009
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    My GOD, that was beautiful.
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  • From AnimeAngelSisters on December 30, 2009
    Wow... Wrong and hot all at once. I LOVE IT! Can't wait for more!
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  • From angelofinnocence on December 30, 2009
    *claps* Bravo! I can't wait for more. Update again as soon as you can. Keep up the good work. There were a mere few grammatical/spelling mistakes, but nothing too serious. I enjoyed reading the newest chapters. I'll be waiting impatiently for more ^_^


    Xander
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  • From skyemeunet on December 30, 2009
    You have no idea how much I adore this story!
    It immediately, from the first chapter, got my full attention and kept it every moment.
    You're descriptiveness is long and perfect, without being excessive.
    I wish I had your ultimate talent in writing, and I look forward anxiously to your newest chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Akano on December 17, 2009
    Omg, thank god! I was starting to think you would never update.

    Falling more and more in love with this story for every chapter! Even though I would love to see some yaoi action I can't resist Defiant-Squall :D I love so much how you made his character!

    Oooh, a cliffhanger! Now I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter!! D: Can't wait!
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  • From SprocketCamelot on December 17, 2009
    Still loving the fic. It's intriguing how Squall didn't object to the restraints so much as he objected to the cock-ring. Was that because it's forcing him to acknowledge his body's reaction to the (fucking hot) scene just before it?
    And you appear to love my "husband", Uruwashii Uso. She's a wonderful woman, and I'm glad you like her too. -thumbs up-
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2009
    Why aren't you updating?!
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  • From ANON - Akano on November 11, 2009
    Love this story alot!! :D

    Please, please, please, please, please write more.
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  • From ANON - EternalChaos on October 16, 2009
    I hope Squall doesn't submit. Seifer may not treat him as bad as the others, but he's still no different from those people. Any person who would take a human and make them into a pet like that needs some serious help and is a terrible person. Seifer thinks way too highly of himself. Most of the slaves he trades probably end up in that horrid place, getting "punished", as he calls that horror.
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  • From SprocketCamelot on October 15, 2009
    About...three-quarters of the way down the page, I let out a howl of amused delight, I must confess. "It's always gonna be sour grapes with you boy." Somehow, I don't see Squall "getting right with Jesus" any time soon.
    About the fic itself...I love it. It really makes you question the morality of someone like Seifer, because even though he's contributing to the slave trade, he's doing it in a way that helps the slaves. And then, of course, there's the question of whether Squall's reacting in proportion to his captivity, or whether he's just being the stubborn ass that he is. XD
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on October 15, 2009
    I'm not so sure I like the style you used at the very beginning. While it meshed well with Squall's incoherience, I found myself confused over the course of the chapter until it changed back to the original style. Of course, that was what you were going for, and it worked but it felt too much like jumping around for my taste. I don't really even understand why Squall was suddenly in pain or why Rinoa had collapsed like she had. Again, it's all very confusing.

    Overall though, the chapter itself was good, and I'm looking forward to reading more of this tale.

    Thanks for the read,
    Anon
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  • From ANON - Kimi on September 22, 2009
    wow, darkly addicting, i hope you can update soon :)
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