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Reviews for Convergence [2]: Blood Roses

By : currie
  • From ANON - Tricia on September 11, 2004
    Great emotion in this chapter (12). And the best part is that it's all very believable. I can see both guys feeling this way -- even Seifer -- because you wrote them very well. Very lyrical language. Small crit -- a couple of times I wasn't sure who was doing what to who (the usual problem we all experience when writing yaoi) so maybe in the next sex scene you could use their names a bit more. Just a minor thing. I enjoyed everything, regardless :)
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  • From ANON - Zierra on September 10, 2004
    I don't think I reviewed chapter 11, although I had every intention to. I actually think I came here tonight to do that, but then you had updated this and I just had to read it.
    I'm biased, I know, when it comes to this relationship. I love Seifer, for who and what he is, but there's just something... I don't know, threatening about him in this story. Not that he's cruel... No, I can't explain what I mean. But there's just something... can't find a better word than wrong, that he's between Squall and Zell. Because he his, just like Squall's between Seifer and Zell and - you know. Don't get me wrong, I absolutly LOVE your story and I don't want you to change the smallest detail, I just wanted to express my - very confused - opinion.
    He's making it difficult for them to bond and to trust eachother.
    *sighs*
    I've got to get my shit together and really learn how to express myself. But I hope you understood some of it!
    And, I'm looking forward to Seifer spending some quality time with Zell, and please, pretty please, don't have them argue though the whole thing!

    Lots of hugs, Z
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  • From ANON - Kayla on September 08, 2004
    Great job Currie! As always, I am in awe of your beautiful writing talent. You could become professional if you chose to.
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  • From ANON - Tricia on September 05, 2004
    I really enjoyed reading about Squall's sudden fixation on Rinoa and Seifer. That felt right. As usual, you've left me leaning so far up against the screen, I've got to wipe the smudge mark of my nose off the monitor. Great job!!
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  • From ANON - cassie on September 05, 2004
    You're making me feel bad for zell. Give him something to make him happy and not just sex.
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  • From ANON - Sapphic Denial on August 06, 2004
    Wow, what a fitting punishment. X3;

    Wonderful use of detail, very amusing throughout

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  • From ANON - Zierra on July 16, 2004
    You have no idea how much time and effort it has taken me to actually read this chapter. First, I could get into the site at all, and this little problem lasted at least a couple of days. And then you removed it and changed it, I take it, just when I got access. And then, I couldn't get inside... But yesterday - FINALLY - I got to read it, and I should have reviewed, if I'd had the mental capacity to do so. There's just one thing bothering me, which I'll probably understand as I read it the second ( no, third) time but I'll ask it anyway. Did Squall like Zell doing him???
    Loved the chapter though! Although it was a long wait, it was all worth it!

    Lots of huggles, Z
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  • From ANON - cassie on July 13, 2004
    sooooooo, ah, what are zell and seifer going to go in their ALONE time? heh heh ;)
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  • From ANON - hopemia on July 10, 2004
    Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!
    Wonderful Currie!!!!!!!!!!!

    Zell is too cute as seme!!!!!
    Whee!!!!! More soon? I hope?
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  • From ANON - Tricia on July 10, 2004
    So I wasn't sure I'd like it when Zell finally got a piece of Squall because I freely admit I'm not a fan of the character of Zell, but this wasn't painful at all. The way you wrote it made it seem less like sex and more like a heartfelt conversation, so it was good. I hope that came out right, lol. I enjoyed the chapter.
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  • From ANON - Clam on July 09, 2004
    Yeah! We finally get to see the update! I -like- the lemon plot combination. And who cares about length when you have Squall and Zell in a shower together? ^^ I can't wait to see Zell and Seifer try to bond, either. Should be fun. ^^
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  • From somadrop on June 29, 2004
    ...

    You know, your talent is an amazing thing. I finished what you have of this story so far, and I was made very, very sad. You need to continue this so that little people like me can read it and be made happy. ^^' Um, at any rate... Thank you for this as well. It's wonderful to readngs ngs like this on a stormy day like today with a cup of hot, good, strong black coffee and giggle.

    Please continue this. Don't make me beg!
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  • From ANON - Zierra on June 17, 2004
    I know I should have reviewed this when I first read it (which was when you posted it), but for me it's been all work and no play. Which means no internet time. I'm only online now, 15 minutes before my alarmclock goes off, too check the delivery on on my new computer. Not that I got any wiser, because apparently, they don't post than information on the internet, or I'm just too stupid to know where to look. This have nothing to do with your story though. Just excuses for being my lazy self.
    HOWEVER: I damn well liked this story, and I've analyzing it for a few days now in my head. Didn't get some of the conversations (the one between Seifer and Squall the most obvious) and I also had a little difficulty undersing ing Zell's ramble about our subconscioussessess-es-er. =o)
    But it might come as a surprise as too why Squall let Zell stay at his aparment. Besides for the most apparent reasons (Zell was practically homeless and have these adorable puppyeyes that I'm sure even Squall has problems denying), there was just something... And it was not the fact that his bed was too big. I refuse to accept that!
    Alright, now when there's about ten minutes left of my sleeping time, I should go back to bed.
    Thanks for an amazing story!


    Hugs, Z

    PS: this is for chapter 8 a als also appologize for any misspellings. Seriously, It's 8.20 am and I'm fucking tired!
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  • From ANON - Clam on June 15, 2004
    Mmm, grapes. Have you ever eaten frozen grapes? Those are the best... Anyway. The story sure took a turn I wasn't expecting. But surprises can be good... ^^; Looking forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - Tricia on June 14, 2004
    Well, the dual Knight thing is an interesting twist. I can't see it bringing anything but angst for Squall. Oh, yeah, and future sex, so it's okay, lol. Great job. Your chapters never fail to hold my attention :)
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