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Reviews for Convergence [2]: Blood Roses

By : currie
  • From ANON - Clam on June 07, 2004
    Wow, I really like this story, especially when things like Squall jumping Seifer happen. ^^ I loved the first one, too, and I can't wait to see how this one turns out.
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  • From ANON - Kookyalert on June 04, 2004
    Zell's a freakin slut! I like your Seifer but I wished that he and Squall could have a little alone time for awhile since it seems that Squall is either with Zell or Seifer's with Zelly...freaking Zell...*grins* Loving this!
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  • From ANON - Zierra on June 01, 2004
    Yeah, you should be really happy about his chapter. I was in awe of how well you write dialogue (and monologue).
    And if Rinoa can maeifeeifer act like a whipped dog, she's not on my assasination list anymore!
    Loved this chapter, even if there was no sex in it! =o)

    Hugs, Z
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  • From ANON - Tricia on June 01, 2004
    Great new chapter. Rinoa's a very captivatinaracaracter. I liked that entire interaction with her at the gate. The kid -- sigh -- complication, but oh well. Again, great stuff!!! Always excited about the next part :)
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  • From ANON - Zierra on May 29, 2004
    Wow.... now that was really... wow.
    Squall is so cuddly when it comes to Zell and so... damn, I promised myself I would never admit this... so sexy when he's with Seifer. Ok, so I knew they'd get it together on that trip, and I can probably bet a couple of dollars that they'll repeat it at least two times before they come back. But if they do, you have to promise me that he'll do it back tll, ll, just as many times. That's my only condition. Who I am to make demands anyway? Sure, I can stop reading, but that would be like saying I would stop breathing. There's no way I'm leaving this half finished!
    I'm truly addicted to this, so please grant me this one little wish. What ever happens, in the end or in your plot, let Zell get the credit. You know, like," I choose you Seifer, but no matter what you do, Zell will always be better", or something like that. Just let him get the credital?
    al?

    Hugs, Z
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  • From ANON - Tricia on May 28, 2004
    Oh, man, this was so damned hot. That whole ending scene was just orgasm-worthy (for them I mean. yeah) Awesome, awesome stuff. Now I'm like drooling over the prospect of Seifer's revenge. Maybe he'll do it in front of Rinoa? Just a thought, lol. Those two together are too hot for words. Update now! NoW NoW NoW!!!
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  • From ANON - hopemia on May 28, 2004
    Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Zell opening the shower curtain with that smile...... *SQUEES*
    Your Zell and Squall are too damn precious together.

    Seifer!!!!!!!
    OOOOOOOOOOO.. WHAT A PROMISE!!!!!!!!!

    SWEET AND HOT = perfect chapter!!!!
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  • From ANON - Zierra on May 21, 2004
    Yes, yes, yes, yessssssssssssssssssss! *doing the crazy dance* Ok, I didn't think that would happen for like a million years! At least not for a few chapters. But it was good, really, really good! It doesn't sound like I mean it without the cusses, but you'll just have to trust me, ok?

    Hugs, Z

    PS; and this was for ch. 5
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  • From ANON - Chibi-chan/Britt on May 21, 2004
    Ah! I'm so sorry I haven't been reviewing or commenting in your journal -- I've been so busy with the end of school coming! *hugs*

    As for the story and this chapter...

    "He didn't want to hear anything else, didn't want to be the whiny bottom that cried every time he got fucked like his eyes were threatening to make him."

    Wah. I love how you write Zell (hell, I love how you write them all, but Zell especially, people make him out different a lot of times and I have to say that I love yours the most). The line I quoted really tugged at my heart at how Zell is struggling with his own feelings for Squall. I thought he was going to cry and hoped he would, but I'm kinda glad he didn't at the same time, you know? It's just how some things fall and in this instance, I didn't really mind if it ended up looking a bit crooked. :) Crooked can be good. ;)

    The threesome was very hot and it's very kinky how they fucked this time. *grin* Taking and being taking, I bet Squall liked that.

    I can't wait to see what happens next in the story -- and I'll try to visit your journal soon and comment lots. ^^ *hugs*
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  • From ANON - hopemia on May 20, 2004
    Hot Damn!!!
    I'm torn for Zell. He finally figured out that he did love Squall. *sigh*
    I hope ZEll doesn't get hur hurt.. maybe Squall will stop fighting so hard and that'll help Zell some.

    But... the smut was out of this world!!!!!!!!!!!
    WAnted to faint when Squall asked to be gagged.

    More, More, More, More!!!!!!!!!!

    And.... Squall was soooo sweet to Zell at the end. Make me wanna cry.
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  • From ANON - Tricia on May 20, 2004
    one down five to go? You mean there's more? Ack!! Well this part was great! You're trying to give me a heart. And the gag, omg, that was so hot! I could just picture Seifer holding that gag ... ooh, need to stop now. Great job coordinating everyone. I know that's the toughest part. But you wrote it very well and -- oh, yeah, I'll say it again: it was hot, hot, hot!!!
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  • From ANON - hopemia on May 17, 2004
    Mmmm.... the net chapter holds alot of promise. *grins evilly*

    I loved the interaction between Laguna and Squall!!!!

    But, the best part was Seifer's golden line..... "If it involves you, it becomes my business."

    Wheeeeeeeeee..... I love a possessive Seifer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    More, more, more, more, more, more, more!!!!!!




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  • From ANON - Zierra on May 17, 2004
    No, I don't want to hit you, or kick you or hurt you in anyway for this chapter... Wait, I might wanna slap you though for putting Seifer and Squall together so that they can have some alone time. And, yes, I know they will. So, how weak is Squall? I know he can stand his ground with Zell, but that boy is just too adorable to do anything provocative, so if he did, maybe Squall would relent. But Seifer.... the man I truly love to hate. Seriously, that expression doesn't fit any other than Seifer. At least not for me.
    Ok, rambling again. Loved it!


    Hugs, Z

    PS, How come I never say which chapter I'm reviewing? This is for chapter 4!
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  • From ANON - Tricia on May 17, 2004
    See, I want to hurt you, but I can't because if you're maimed, you can't type. ARGH!!! Actually, I really enjoyed the phone conversation with Rinoa for some reason. That adds a neat little twist and ups the emotional stakes a bit so I found that interesting. As for the damned ending . . . I know you already know what I'm thinking. I'm not even going to say it.
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  • From ANON - hopemia on May 14, 2004
    Ahh, that was really nice.
    You write all the boys perfectly!!!
    Zell is way sweet!! And!!!!!!!!!! He's loved Squall for two years!!! *squees*

    My favorite part was Zell ling ing at Seifer punching his bag.. you have some of the best visual's of *astory I've read.


    More, More, More!!!!!!!
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