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Reviews for Living in Darkness

By : horrorgal
  • From Tieo on June 18, 2007
    Evil Cloud turns me on...
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  • From mirage on April 26, 2007
    i love your story. it had the most perfect ending ever. lol we need more evil
    anyway, that's how i'd end it too.
    thanx
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  • From Alucinor on April 13, 2007
    Yes, yes, yes....PLEASE let it be the Final Fantasy 9 world they destroyed...I HATED that game...

    But I LOVED this story...hehe...very...yum...can't really describe it any other way...I rather enjoyed the corrupted Cloud, as well...*grins*
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  • From Leonhart29 on April 03, 2007
    Hey chick - I knew it would be good and you don't ever disappoint. I happen to like the ending you had always planned to do, and I'm very glad you followed your heart and wrote this for you. Wonderful - and I happen to agree - FF IX was the worst - and I'm quite happy with the thought of Richard Scarry runs amuck is history.

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  • From calenloke on April 03, 2007
    I love it!

    I totally agree with you about the ending! I always wanted to see a dark Cloud. I love it! I have no complaints. lol. The other two alter endings I agree would be too brutal or sappy for our favorite yaoi pair :)

    I think it was nicely done and hope to read more of your work in the future. Especially a Sephiroth and Cloud fic. O
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  • From shidoburrito on April 03, 2007
    I think this fanfic ended beautifully. It's a great dark ending to a wonderfully dark theme! I wouldn't have it any other way. I really enjoyed reading your fanfic, and I always anticipated the updates. You're writing is wonderful, please keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 02, 2007
    rawrgh, that was so raw and sad. *sniff* but good in a dark way. a disturbing but powerful ending. *sniff sniff sniff* I'll look forward to your next story! :D :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 27, 2007
    You know what? I just had another thought about the Cloud/Sephiroth tango that you have going here... It sort of reminds me of the dynamic between Elizabeth Turner and Cap'n Jack Sparrow in Dead Man's Chest - yes, that kissing scene, LOL! Although much, much darker of course. Not that Cloud is a virgin in the physical sense, but in terms of morality and sin, he deffo is. Sephiroth/Jack Sparrow on the other hand, they're total friggin' sluts. LAWLS!
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  • From Leonhart29 on March 27, 2007
    This is getting interesting - not that it wasn't before, but now even more so. I love the way you torment Cloud with all these choices, but I have to wonder if he'll make the right one.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2007
    Opps made a mistake, so I'll review again!!

    I like the theme of Cloud's humanity battling with his desire coming out. Nice, gradual, plausible buildup. 'Specially liked the bit where he remembers his loved ones but can no longer feel as much as he used to. So sad. *Sniff* Sephy is soooo evil, but it wouldn't be right if he weren't. *Sobs* for the destruction of Cloud's humanity. He gets beat up and tossed around an awful lot on AFF, doesn't he LOL? I'm guilty of it too. :p

    Yessssssssssssssssss FIVES STARS momma! Morrrrrrre!
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  • From kirabates on March 26, 2007
    YAY!!! You updated!!! I'm SOOOOO happy!!! I really cant wait for more I check for updates every day!!! I cant wait to read more!! Update Soon!!!
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  • From vivarose on March 19, 2007
    oh a portal to another dimension! yay!
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  • From kirabates on March 19, 2007
    I love your story. Your writing is brilliant, there are some instances though that you need to be a litle more specific when it comes down to the he's and him's. lol, cuz you confused me a couple times. lol. other than that it is wonderfully writting and I can't wait for an update. I really hope you update soon. PLEASE!!!
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  • From Leonhart29 on March 15, 2007
    I'm wondering just what the hell Sephiroth has cooked up in that little portal of his, and it hurts my heart that Cloud's having such a hard time coming to terms with his feelings. But if he didn't have a hard time with it he wouldn't be Cloud, right?
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2007
    Ooh, cliffhanger. I can't wait to find out what the vortex is about. Cloud is starting to actually enjoy the fact that he is enjoying himself... Ooooh naughty.

    5 starz!!!!!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!
    :D :D
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