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Reviews for Master of Slaves

By : arsenicstings
  • From on September 10, 2009
    Yay another chapter. This one was really good. I'm not sure how I feel on Squall's last reaction, I understand he is in a special predicament and feeling vulnerable but I don't think Squall would so quickly "want" Seifer with him. But I think you will flesh that out better as the next chapters come out. ^^

    I also particularly liked the beginning of the chapter.
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  • From ANON - tripliss on September 10, 2009
    yay!!! new chapter!! Poor nida, though. i wonder what squall and him will think of each other? can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From DekorxAo on September 07, 2009
    Wow. Seifer tests slaves out like that? Hmm... well at least it wasn't rape! Gah, I hope you update soon ;). This story is pretty fun to read, and I really do look forward to more.
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  • From DekorxAo on September 07, 2009
    and so the appearance of the scars comes to be! This really makes me wonder where Squall has come from, who he is, and more about him in general! Hopefully we'll find more out about him soon!
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  • From DekorxAo on September 07, 2009
    Hmmmm, an appearance of a mysterious stranger! Also, Squall spitting on Seifer. XD I can see that, defiantly.
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  • From DekorxAo on September 07, 2009
    I love that Squall isn't giving in, :D! Seifer has met his match :B
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  • From DekorxAo on September 07, 2009
    Squall's name is pretty appropiate, lol, my rp partner's Seifer would always make a joke that Squall's name was appropriate because he 'squalled' a lot. DX

    Love this.
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  • From on September 04, 2009
    Wonderful story. Oh my goodness, the tension between Seifer and Squall is delicious!

    And wow, that scene with Tidus was HOT. I can't wait for another chapter. Please continue!! This story is really different and interesting.
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  • From DekorxAo on September 04, 2009
    I'm pretty excited about this story! :P


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  • From ANON - Blue on August 30, 2009
    OH GOD I LOVE THIS. Please don't die, Squall.

    It sure would show Seifer, though. Controlling bastard.

    Who I secretly love.
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  • From ANON - Tripliss on August 22, 2009
    Yay!! new chapter. I just love your story! i have to say, there aren't enough seifer/squall stories out there, and yours is definetly one of the best. keep up with the wonderful writing! i want to know what happens to Squall!!!
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  • From Spophaloaf on July 25, 2009
    Hello Mr. I'm-not-doing-anything-you-say Leonhart! I love how you've made Squall so proud that he won't be easy for Seifer.

    Heck, if I were in Squall's shoes, or lack thereof, I'd let Seifer do anything to me! Corrr!

    Love how you're going with the story though, and really can't wait for more! Keep it up!
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  • From Spophaloaf on July 07, 2009
    I like what you did with Rinoa! Good way to keep her annoying mouth shut!

    Poor Squall being so close yet so far, I don't think I'd have forgiven you if you let him run away. Seifer sure does need to punish him for that slip-up. Punish him in the nicest of teasing and tormenting ways of course *smiles innocently with halo beaming above head*

    I'm really enjoying it so far, but I think Seifer needs to lock all doors and windows in his mansion, just so if Squall tries to do a runner again, he literally can't get out.

    And speaking of Rinoa again, it would be funny if she let slip that she loved Seifer and he smacked her for it, but maybe that's just my horrid imagination.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Me on July 05, 2009
    I had my doubts, I'll admit. Slavefics tend to leave the gate open for poor characterisation in the name of smut, but this is doing just nicely so far. I shall definitely be looking out for further installments.
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  • From Spophaloaf on July 04, 2009
    Really enjoyed the opening introduction to Seifer and Irvine, and this chapter to Squall also. It's encouraging to see a decent storyline that isn't pulled from the game.
    Keep up the good work :)
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