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Reviews for Arcane Crisis

By : Chemotaxis
  • From AloraCorwyn on July 31, 2009
    God your writing sends chills down my spine. I absolutely /love/ this story and how you're unfolding it. The way the two fall into easy routine with each other, working together in perfect synchronization without saying a word... and then all of it shattered by someone else's interference (Quistis's, no less; /perfect/). It's all so deliciously good.

    I don't know if you have an editor or a beta, or whatever, but there are a couple of simple typos that caught my eye (two instances of "the the" and a couple things with verbs or something)--just thought you might like to be made aware.

    Can't wait for the next section!!
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  • From TypeZero on July 20, 2009
    Ooh, this is really hot, please keep going!!
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  • From AloraCorwyn on July 20, 2009
    Jeez Chem, you're a little twisted. /Wonderful/ writing! You paint both men's myriads of emotions so beautifully; I can practically see and feel their frustrations, angers, and desperation. I really love that your story starts out so dark. As much as I enjoy some of the stories that begin with the two gunbladists falling lovey-dovey into each other, it's refreshing to see something that breaks away from the fanfic norm. I impatiently await your next post. Thank you for your words!
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  • From Spophaloaf on July 20, 2009
    Oooff! As much as this was a humiliation for Squall, I think you conveted it really well.

    I like how Seifer appears to be straight and is now getting hot for Leonhart.

    Great chapter, can't wait to see where you take this now. Definitely looking forward to it! :)
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  • From Spophaloaf on July 15, 2009
    Good start to the story, I'm glad there's still some hostility (is that even a word?) between them, and that neither of them will back down so easily.

    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From AloraCorwyn on July 15, 2009
    My apologies for the double post, but I had to thank you with a heavy *bow* for reviving my love of Sukunami (I read your profile here on aff). I have read /so/ many of Suk's stories and loved them all, but it was a couple of years ago and while still endlessly fond in my heart, my memories had begun to fade on them.

    So thank you again, for giving me the push to seek Suk's webpage, and for writing what looks to be a great story.
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  • From AloraCorwyn on July 14, 2009
    Your writing is beautiful! Please continue with this story. Thank you so much for your words.
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