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Reviews for Fatality I: Teasing

By : writeright
  • From ANON - s and s blah on July 19, 2004
    Irvy crying. I wish I could hold his hand and help him maybe beat Squall upside the head, so that he will be able to admit that he loves Irvy. Irvy will get Squall in the end right?:)


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  • From ANON - Keishi on July 19, 2004
    LOL, I don't hate you or this chapter. I certainly didn't expect them to just fall immediately into roetaletal-and-champagne love for each other right away. Though... your author notes seem to convey that this fic isn't going to end happily, hmm? Either way, please don't stop writing.

    And you should definitely write more FF8!
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  • From Guenhwyvarsmind on July 18, 2004
    *sniffle* Poor Irvine... and poor Squall too. And yet - they're both right. How are they going to resolve this? *waits*

    I've got my one solitary FFVIII fic up here, maybe you saw the name there? Although it's probably recognizable to anyone familiar with the "Forgotten Realms" universe. ;)
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  • From ANON - s and s blah on July 17, 2004
    Sorry bout no punctuation. Wrote that last review in a hurry. This one is just to tell you that I really love Squall and Irvine together and to give you the punctuation mark that I missed last time you place them where they need to go.


    ....,......,,,,,,,

    Any left save for later.
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  • From ANON - Lion on July 14, 2004
    Not bad. The Laguna/Squall thing has me all... naseated, but other than that it was a good read. Keep up the nice work.
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  • From ANON - Guenhwyvar on July 14, 2004
    Mmm, nice. I'm enjoying this, keep at it!

    Man, what a lame review... *facepalms*...
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  • From ANON - Keishi on July 11, 2004
    Lovely, sexy chapter. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Naniris (Logging in is too much trouble) on July 10, 2004
    WHOA! This last chapter(8) was good. I like the introspection that you did for both characters. Working through their feelings instead of being instantly in love.

    The lemon was great, it contrasts well with the last one. Read them back-to-back: from rough lust to sensual love. ^^

    Also, yaaaay Zell-reference! Nice way to use it as a good diversion. In the previous chapter, yaaaay Seifer-reference! Ok, I'm done.

    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From tarredglittered on July 10, 2004
    Mmyumm, Squall/Irvine! I do love this pairing, more than any other FF8 pairing, definitely. But you don't care about that, do you? Onto the review!

    This fic started out a bit shaky, and I was a bit wary of it, but you have certainly flourished as a writer since the beginning chapter. The later chapters have more lush description, and you seem to gain confidence as you continue, so I'm expecting the next chapter to be pretty darn amazing! (not to put the pressure on you, lol)

    ^-^ Please, please don't stop with the Squall/Irvine yumminess. There definitely needs to be more in this world. (I am insatiable!)

    Oh, and for the record, I rather enjoyed your Rinoa. Most yaoi writers tend to write her as either annoying or a bitch (or both), so to find a caring, more human Rinoa was refreshing.
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  • From ANON - Naniris on July 03, 2004
    Thanks for reviewing my fic. I'm here to return the favor. Sorry it took me so long; I finally finished reading Teasing.
    We're like two sides of the same coin. I rarely like fics with pairings that isn't SeiferxZell, but I'm enjoying this one. (Neither of their names have been mentioned in this fic, besides that you despise Zell T-T...j/k^^)

    You could go into more detail of what is the attraction that Squall and Irvine feel for each other that goes beyond lust. What is it about Irvine, personality-wise, that would confuse Squall emotionally? If Irvine knows that his feelings are more than infatuation, can he identify the cause? Or is it a simple chemistry that they have?
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  • From ANON - s and s blah on July 01, 2004
    irvine and squall are my 2nd fave pair seifer and squall are number 1, but enough on that great story and squall begining confused is very nice touch to the story but in the end you should put him and irvine together anyway great story keep writing
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  • From ANON - Neko on June 27, 2004
    I'm a sucker for romance, plus I love Squall and Irvine together. With the way their thinking is going, I don't think they could keep it just physical for very long anyway. *wants fluff and romance* lol

    Great story ^_^ Smut is good, but it's better with at least a little plot. Kudos to you! And keep up the great work!! =D
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  • From ANON - Fox on June 25, 2004
    Awesome story so far. I love how you're working the plot. The way the two tease each other is really great too. I love the ideas.
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  • From ANON - Natalie on June 01, 2004
    It would be good idea to continue and add a plot, you've got a great beginning!! I love that short fyes,yes, I love it when Irvine is the Uke!! he he!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 31, 2004
    listen, if you don't write more, I may have to kill you!
    That was h-o-t, so you HAVE to do another chapter.
    Start typing 'holds axe above your head' ^___^
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