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Reviews for Requiem of a Spirit

By : worsel
  • From ANON - nihilatrix on January 30, 2006
    Very good start, great premise...I'd read it even if I weren't a total sucker for a rational Sephiroth! It will be interesting to see him as completely sane, and not mushily OOC. In my opinion, it is more difficult to write the rational, ordinary human being than the insane. It's also a nice portrayal of Cloud as a strong and complete person. It's really easy to write him as a weak little uke, probably because he's such a short shit. Capturing the everyday ambivalence and complications of being human is not easy. Please do keep writing, because I assuredly will keep reading!
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  • From Dvana on January 30, 2006
    A good beginning here, honestly. ^^ I think your characterization is solid, and it doesn't look like you're falling into the "weak and helpless Cloud" we see all too often. For that alone I would praise you, but you also seem to have an intriuging plot and, at least in the beginning, my fav ffvii pairing. Woot.
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  • From ANON - lin on January 30, 2006
    I thought that this first chapter has alot of possibility. I like how you captured Clouds feelings that he can't just live his life and is always being dragged into things that he really wants to stay out of. Advent children really expressed that and I think its an important element. Cloud is a naturally caring person, willing to fight, but when it comes down to it, he'd really just like a break to not feel responsible for everything.
    This fic seems to have alot of possibilities and I can't wait for more!!
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