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Reviews for To Trust A Cop

By : Shehanitan
  • From Sammei on October 07, 2006
    ..I am totally antsy for more. ^_^; Your first one that I read, Cops Can't Be Trusted, was soo hot. Very well written, and, whew! :fans self: Anyhow, I was so excited when I found that you decided to do a sequel! It's turning out really well, and the first chapter definitely didn't disappoint as far lemons go! I'm glad that this is going to explain how Seifer and Squall end up getting together. I can't wait to see what happens: is Seifer going to show up as a customer to Squall's work? Is Squall going to run into him again because he runs out of gas ~again~? Oh, poor Squall. Looking forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - AO on October 05, 2006
    oh god, that was angsty. Its interesting hearing more about Squall's life, but its so sad. :( Seifer will make it better, right?
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  • From suixcausa on October 05, 2006
    =o plotplotplot! -glomp-

    If you're wanting a beta reader, I could probably volunteer. ^^; Just because you have such a good story and stupid typos don't deserve to be part of it. xO You could e-mail me or if you have instant messangers like AIM we could talk over that? I'd be interested in helping out. :D
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  • From ANON - florinoir on October 04, 2006
    Poor Squally, hard life...
    Good continuation!^^
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  • From ANON - Sharon on October 04, 2006
    I hope you find a new beta soon. The chapter was fine considering you were the only set of eyes able to proof read it. The errors throughout it didn't detract from the story too much. It was a short chapter, but nicely done. It was more like a description of everything than actual plot or action, but I suppose you're still trying to set things up for a multichapter fic. Honestly, while I enjoy your stories, this chapter felt off for me. It wasn't so much the painting of Squall as some dumb woe is me child, but that it didn't seem to fit in anywhere with the first chapter. The two chapters felt like they had nothing to do with each other, as if they aren't even a part of the same story. But, I'm still holding out for more, knowing you'll get things rolling and tie it together in the future.
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  • From ANON - Annabelle on October 03, 2006
    Oh god, please write more, this was so hot! I want to see more kinky sex with them!
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  • From ANON - rem on October 02, 2006
    RAWR!!!! UPDATE. need smut+plot. *splode*

    anyways, you need to get a beta-reader or something, cause the first few paragraphs were riddled with grammar/spelling errors O:

    but it's okaym it got better as it went on, but didnt completely go away.


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  • From ANON - Layla on October 02, 2006
    *TACKLE GLOMP O'LOVE* XD XD XD!!! You made the sequel!!! I love you so much!
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  • From suixcausa on September 29, 2006
    I saw this and read the first one, and now I'm reviewing to say that you must continue this. xO Your lemons are yummy and these two boys deserve more. ... And I swear to god I'm going to start developing a cop fetish now because of you. xD
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  • From ANON - Jessifer on September 28, 2006
    Squeee! I love this story. I'm willing to review if it gets another chapter up. ;D
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2006
    Still just as hot as the first one. I look forward to whatever else you have planned, be it plot or smut or both.
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  • From ANON - Tyr (should log in) on September 27, 2006
    YAY! New story! =) I love your stories. I definitely want to know more about their relationship so please write more? ^^
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  • From ANON - florinoir on September 27, 2006
    That was so porno... I don't mean it in the bad way, of course, cause well... I loved it!^^
    /Squall/ Perverted... All of you!!
    Ooooh yeah!!^^
    Good luck with the continuation!^^
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