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By : Rina76
  • From ANON - Ravenlyn on September 21, 2008
    Aww not again! Now I'm still stuck wondering what will happen next. What a great story! I was thinking "Oh yay some more action and then- Oh no she ended it again when it was getting even better!" ^_________^ I hope when I write things I'll have my readers as hooked as I am to this story! You keep up the good writing, ok?
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  • From Kerianya on September 20, 2008
    Hehe...Yazoo likes it rough; we all know this :P

    You made my weekend with this update! I hope real life doesn't interfere too much with the next instalment! This story is one of the most entertaining I have read here.

    Kerianya XxX
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  • From ANON - juri on August 20, 2008
    Oooh, very good, very hot. I totally loved Yazoo in this chapter. Can't wait for more of the Loz/Yazoo!
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  • From Kerianya on August 20, 2008
    Lol, I bet you could Loz, I bet you could!

    This chapter was so exquisitely written my dear, it left me positively drooling!
    I'm not surprised that Loz turned out to be one of the monster c*ck variety - just like how I imagine Rude would be!

    All the same, I think THIS time Kadaj and Yazoo should let their big burly brother take control in the next chapter - I think it is in everyone's interest that they do! Perhaps then they will realise that they'd have had much more fun if they hadn't neglected him.

    Looking forward to the next instalment

    Kerianya XxX
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  • From honZeldaFitz on August 19, 2008
    Another good chapter. Poor Loz. He still can't believe that they could really be attracted to him. I hope Kadaj and Yazoo appreciate him after this, and show him once in a while. Loz is just a big teddy bear (though he does hit really, really hard!) ^__^
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  • From ANON - Ravenlyn on August 19, 2008
    Wow part three was amazing! Now I'm like not again! I wanna know what happens next. This story's got me so hooked that it's in my bookmarks! O.O You have to be quite amazing for me to bookmark your story, that's for sure! Anyway, keep on writing this, and I kinda found it cute/funny how Loz couldn't contain himself. Can't wait for the next part!
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  • From Raiast on August 19, 2008
    This story never fails to get me horny... no matter how many times I read it.

    Great job. Keep it up, update soon!
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  • From ANON - mystic87 on August 18, 2008
    Very sexy! Can't wait for more. They always did make a great threesome! By the way, I think you should let Loz have his way with Kadaj. He is the "baby" brother, after all!!
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  • From ANON - Ravenlyn on August 11, 2008
    Ok, I gotta say this is a good story! I hope you finish it, because I'm wondering what's going to happen next and it kept me reading from the first chapter to the second. I hope you decide to finish it. Good idea, I was hoping someone would write a story like this one!
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  • From ANON - pink_angel_wings on August 03, 2008
    I'm thinking one of Loz's strengths would be as a bear and a top & that Kadaj would secretly get off on that, maybe a little too much(?) Loz could really work that little bod & be unmerciful to his smaller brother. I like Loz, too - he's beefy and not a big thinker. Plz continue. Don't make me hunt you down! ^_^
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  • From ANON - pink_angel_wings on August 03, 2008
    I like it (I typed lick at first & had to go back & change it ^_^). You did a good job characterizing Loz - I think he would lose it and scream at the two. For some reason their incest doesn't bother me. I don't know why ... anyway - I hope you continue! I gotta read the next chappie & see who's gettin nekkie ^_^
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  • From honZeldaFitz on August 03, 2008
    Oh wow... very nice. I like the way you're going with this. Kadaj and Yazoo are dangerous and Loz knows it, but Kadaj's gentleness throws him - yet he doesn't trust either one of them so the tension stays high. That's hard to do, btw. I'm really enjoying this. Can't wait to see what happens with Yazoo. ^_~
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  • From Kerianya on August 03, 2008
    Oh my! I'm so glad that you decided to continue this fic.

    You're wecome for the previous review - I won't review something unless I've enjoyed it.

    What an update! I loved the way Kadaj (such a little minx)got his lovely big brother all hot and bothered. Ever since I saw Advent Children I have imagined the demonic trio as raging nymphomaniacs, and it's good to see somebody else writing them that way.

    Can't wait for the next chapter - I can see Yazoo being unable to walk for a day or two if Loz gets going.

    Kerianya XxX
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  • From ANON - lolita on July 25, 2008
    awesome story please continue!! :D
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  • From Raiast on July 15, 2008
    oooh, oh no, you definitely aren't the only one that wants to read something like this. lol

    I love the way you capture all of their personalities. The way some people write Yazoo and Kadaj together is ridiculous and completely OOC, but you kept them in their personas perfectly. I imagine Kadaj would have acted just that way being caught in that kind of situation.

    Love it. Don't listen to what weird people say. Keep going.
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