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Reviews for Left Out

By : Rina76
  • From ANON - oztan on July 14, 2008
    I was hopping to Loz to go away for a while. So his two brother know how much they really need him.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2008
    I'm so tired that I'm just gonna say 'WRITE MOAR NAO.'

    hope that got the message across...~~
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  • From ANON - norr on July 12, 2008
    I´d like to read more very much! Its great, especially that you kept everone ic so very well. please update?
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on July 12, 2008
    Oh yes please more. This is definitely what I want to read!
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  • From ANON - juri on July 12, 2008
    Nicely written! I especially liked the visual from Loz's comparison of Kadaj's hair to strands of metal. The balance of "hard" and "soft" of the characters and their behaviors/interactions is very good.

    I love all three of them together. Kadaj is being wonderfully Kadaj, but Yazoo needs to comfort his Loz! :) I would love to see more.
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  • From honZeldaFitz on July 11, 2008
    I'd like to see more of this, too. This first chapter was well done. ^__^
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  • From ANON - x on July 11, 2008
    Eek, Loz!! He needs more luff. My favorite character, the big crybaby. =]

    DEFINITELY continue. Even if it was a story about a trip to the grocery store or something mundane, it'd be awesome just because it's finally story about Loz.

    All it needs is more Vincent now..
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  • From Kerianya on July 11, 2008
    Oooh! It's very good. Please update soon. Advent Children incest is always welcomed.

    Loz isn't my favourite but I couldn't help but sympathise with him. You've portrayed him really well.

    Kerianya XxX
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