Reviews for Frozen Dance

BY : Shehanitan

  • From ANON - lo on May 29, 2010

    That was really sweet. I think a BETA would really help you, nice work.

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  • From ANON - Shiiroro on May 18, 2010

    Awww, that was soo cuuute!~

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  • From ANON - bossy_foodshield on January 19, 2010

    maybe you can't write short stories, but that makes that rest of us all so happy :) thanks for the chapter

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  • From Vovo on December 30, 2009

    Hello! Itís very nice to read your story. Iím worried about some things in my life and reading makes me feel better.
    I always thought Seifer would be capable of scoring max points, but he didnít because he didnít like to study and he knew that fact. But to make things clear, Iím not criticizing the way you put this issue in your story, just commenting on the way I imagine him to be.
    I do imagine Squall never thinking about sleeping in! Not even on holidays!
    Most of the time, descriptions, in general, bore me, but I liked the way you described the growth of Balamb Town.
    I really liked the talk about couchs in the library.
    The fighting scene was really good and I like the way Seifer own, how they lied there... I also liked the end of the chapter, itís a little sad, but I think that when the time for him to feel warmer comes, he will feel it a lot more.
    So, Iím here waiting for the next chapter and I have to plead once again for you to update more chapters of Office Follies. Have a nice New Year!

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  • From arsenicstings on December 30, 2009

    ::stabs dagger into heart::
    Ah! I love it! The agonizing Seifer, somehow I enjoy it more than an agonizing Squall. And ah jealousy, the ugly step-sister of love. I didn't realize how much I enjoyed a jealous Seifer until reading this story. I really want to see him explode on Squall, take all those doubts and insecurities out of Squall. Because Lord, if anyone else was dating the stoic boy they'd be inclined to strangle him for not showing enough affection, or reacting to anything even. After the incident in Balamb town I feel like i'm feeling and seeing through Seifer's eyes. You've colored the remaining story from his perspective. I feel angry and hurt that there was a possibility of Squall cheating on Seifer.
    Thank you again for providing good reading material over break!
    Please continue!

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  • From ANON - YACUMO on December 25, 2009

    OMG Sooo frigging cute!!!
    Loved the smex scene by the way!!
    Happy Christmas!!

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  • From arsenicstings on December 24, 2009

    Thank you, first of all, for writing this during the dreaded holiday season. It gives me something to look forward to after the horrid family dinner. I found this piece interesting, especially compared to your more popular work, To Trust a Cop. Seifer is so very confident in TTC, but in this one he's got a lot more humanity and humility. It was entertaining to see a vulnerable Seifer coming from your mind ^.^

    Happy Holidays
    Feliz Navidad!
    Noche Buena!

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