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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmm very sexy and hot but need more! UPDATE SOON! i need to read the next lesson. mmm need more of sexy seifer dominating his lover squall.
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Pokes repeatedly* More, please?
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I love it, so romantic...
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice... I like where this is going. Squall all bound up, mmm...
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice... I like where this is going. Squall all bound up, mmm...
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi th
This is well writtenn, keep it up!
Just one thing about the rating: It's R. NC-17 would mean you'd had to describe the "games" they played in detail. This isn't detailed. You know, the rating isn't just a warning, it's also... well, a promis. If I look von fics I chose them by rating only taking those with an NC-17. And not finding what you're expecting is kinda disappointing.
That doesn't mean I son't like you're fic, I wouldn'd review it if I didn't. But maybe you could make the next chapter mor graphc. ^_^x
Ciao!
Felerian
This is well writtenn, keep it up!
Just one thing about the rating: It's R. NC-17 would mean you'd had to describe the "games" they played in detail. This isn't detailed. You know, the rating isn't just a warning, it's also... well, a promis. If I look von fics I chose them by rating only taking those with an NC-17. And not finding what you're expecting is kinda disappointing.
That doesn't mean I son't like you're fic, I wouldn'd review it if I didn't. But maybe you could make the next chapter mor graphc. ^_^x
Ciao!
Felerian
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wOOt!!!!!!!!!
I was hoping you'd put this story up somewhere!!!!!!!
Just can hardly wait for more!!!!!!!!!
I was hoping you'd put this story up somewhere!!!!!!!
Just can hardly wait for more!!!!!!!!!